All Comments  for

Zoë's Prospects Ch. 01

byToadieZ©
All
Comments (8)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by curiousk7509/06/07

mascara bottle???

loved your writing, however i am left wondering if they supersize the mascara bottles over your way??? all i know is if my boyfriend was only a little larger than a mascara bottle i would be crying...

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous09/06/07

Whoo

Been reading erotica for quite a while on here, I definitely liked your style of writing, very unique. Kudos to you, can't wait to read more!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous09/07/07

hmm I likey this

You had me "up" since the second paragraph...good work ;-;
saya

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by angelOFdemise10/17/07

The Mascara Bottle

Threw me off because here they are the size of a finger. Perhaps they are different where you are. I did enjoy reading your story. The style is refreshing.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/30/07

Hot damn...

Definetely a very good story. Had me "interested" till the very end... and then over the next read. Keep it up, it was very, very good!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by sabrinarai08/25/08

loved it

reminds me of my younger days.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by lovercat294206/30/10

Very realistic character, very realistic scene

One of the best and most realistic masturbation stories I have read. Love the way Zoe is constantly in touch with her FEELINGS and wanting to pleasure herself intensely, in just the right way, after that slow, slow buildup--then enjoying each orgasm to the max.

Is there boing to be a chapter 2??

Steve

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by lovercat294206/30/10

Re the mascara bottle

Hey, she said the bottle fit comfortably inside her; that bit of subjectivity is all I need to know in the context of the story.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Zoë's Prospects Ch. 01  or
More submissions by ToadieZ.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel