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by livingsingl09/05/07

Not bad for your first story

Not bad. Hope to read more from you.

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by shmueltzvy09/05/07

So Beautiful... So Sad

The passion and the pathos come through. It's so beautifully written and yet so sad a tale. May the future be brighter... and please keep writing.

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by whiskymac09/05/07

Good story

Cracking story lass please keep writing

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by Anonymous09/10/07

great anal play

I liked the part about how you controlled your anus to tease his tongue- very powerful and sensual - you must have real experience!

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by Anonymous12/30/11

Proofing

please.. Let someone proof read your work. The past tense is horrible - wetted - ?? I got in my Honda, I used to drive. It's just constructive critiscm, nice idea, just below average writing.

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