Eugene

Nice twist

Good short story, well done !

Hmmm...

Erotic - no. Thought provoking and interesting - of course.

I like it...

that's good enough for me. :)

Liked this one a lot. It had an unsettling start, a frantic middle and a twisted end wrapped into one small package. Circle of life for Eugene.

Good Deeds

Good deeds seldom go unpunished........

voted 5 stars , enjoyed reading it , interesting , thought provoking ..

lol Eugene , is proly the epitome of " waste of space "
good story , Author did all but sign post the colossal fuck up , then the Author redeems himself , by at least having Eugene do the decent thing to end it.

although ..
dumb enough to goto the park to kill himself , dumb enough not to ask questions or take a few seconds to reflect before shooting unarmed men who know him by name ...
somehow after murdering them , he has the capacity .. to make a rational decision..

story throws you for a loop , how can he make so many bad decisions , yet in the moment of most anxiety , he makes a most sensible choice ...

sorry not horror
sorry not erotic
possibly humor & satire ??

xxxhugsxxx

TwistedOliver.