by Christie052780
I wonder if the ski mask would help me when I want another...lol, Wonderful story, even if a weird nightmare.
And while I understand you tried to cross and mix it up, you failed. The writing simply wasn't compelling enough to have me believe her reaction and his actions. A "1".
eleven days was one of the best erotic stories ever written. Unfortunately this one did not meet that level. It was too predictable and well, this plot line is way over done. Christie has shown she is capable of doing so much better. I am eagerly awaiting her next story.