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beautiful!
I loved it, Foehn. The picture is lovely as well.
I have a nit-pick though. The word "little" ...is it really needed? read it without that word.
my favorite lines are--
if the shuddering sun is not too tense,
I’d also like to hear the wings of owls.
That is beyond beautiful. Loved it, thanks for posting!
Burned by the sun
Great combo. All the senses are triggered. and what a photo! Here the photo and words worked perfectly together (on the imagination). More yes?
your poem
has been mentioned in this thread :) thanks for sharing!
http://forum.literotica.com/showthre ad.php?p=24416985#post24416985
Kiss the desert sky gooodbye
That is to deep for most of us.
ON MISSING HOME
from a lonely traveler. TK U MLJ LV NV
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