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Excellent
Undoubtedly the best non-erotic story I've read here. I'll be reading the rest of your submissions and doing a search for foehn too. You're a very talented writer. I'm envious. :-)
Stunning..
This was beautifully written. That you are a poet comes through loud and clear as it reads like poetry but with the solid structure of a story. I thought that I had read some really fantastic stories on here, and I have, but I have never had such a visceral reaction to one until now. My chest felt hollow with her pain. It was as though I could feel my own edges unraveling under the tug of her loneliness.I could go on and on...but I won't..I try to sound like a dork for only brief amounts of time.and that time is up. Thank you for sharing with us! And I dare to ask "Please, Sir, may have I have some more?"
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