All Comments on 'Living in the High Street Ch. 01'

The theme is common enough, the weekly newsletter delivery lady is interesting enough, the main character is brave enough, and the multitude of possible twists are hot enough. Please; don't stop now.

And something yanked my chain, too. Made a mess. Need more exploits. I've done almost exactly the same thing. Sure makes the head sensitive - 3 soft touches = mess. Write more.

When is the next chapter.... nice scene