Poor Samuel exauthor, at least deleting comments are keeping you from submitting anymore of your masterpieces, so lets all post comments, lots and lots.
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Anonymous09/10/07
Stay Where You Are
We certainly dont want the likes of you anywhere in Europe
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Anonymous09/13/07
Hilarious!
Without having read anything else by the author, I have to say that this was the funniest, rawest piece of blaxploitation writing I've seen in a while! Well done, and hilarious! If you imagine some kind of 70's wah-wah music like the Theme from Shaft in the background while you read it, it's even better! I swear, after half of Ray Knight's comments, I could just hear Richard Roundtree saying "Ahhh, yeahhh." :-D
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Anonymous03/07/09
I meet the criterion lmao
Lol, you made sure to shove the fact he was black, handsome & sucessful down our throats. Cute story.
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Anonymous04/25/11
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Why are all your stories the same?
It's like you have a template for every story. Broaden your horizons dude.
Come up with better!
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Anonymous08/29/11
Criticism
Dude, just tell the tale and keep a lot of your life story out of it. No offense, but it throws your readers off a bit.
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Poor Samuel exauthor, at least deleting comments are keeping you from submitting anymore of your masterpieces, so lets all post comments, lots and lots.
Stay Where You Are
We certainly dont want the likes of you anywhere in Europe
Hilarious!
Without having read anything else by the author, I have to say that this was the funniest, rawest piece of blaxploitation writing I've seen in a while! Well done, and hilarious! If you imagine some kind of 70's wah-wah music like the Theme from Shaft in the background while you read it, it's even better! I swear, after half of Ray Knight's comments, I could just hear Richard Roundtree saying "Ahhh, yeahhh." :-D
I meet the criterion lmao
Lol, you made sure to shove the fact he was black, handsome & sucessful down our throats. Cute story.
. .
Why are all your stories the same?
It's like you have a template for every story. Broaden your horizons dude.
Come up with better!
Criticism
Dude, just tell the tale and keep a lot of your life story out of it. No offense, but it throws your readers off a bit.
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