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Slave Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/12/08

sadistic brutality

there is no real sex in this story. only sado masochistic brutality. misogynism, and a deep fear of the femnine gender. not very original. tripe.

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by Anonymous11/27/09

Interesting

This story is an interesting one. I like it because of the lengthy process of peircing her. Not the pain a person would be in but the way the peicings would look on her. It must have taken you some time to work out the entire setup.
Shows promise
azs

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by steph2004ster05/29/10

Not possible

It is just not possible to have a more volcanic story. no idea how this story can continue much longer, with so much action already completed.

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by Anonymous01/15/14

WOW!

That's a lot to be subject to. I sorta wish there were some drawings to all this that one might see what our heroine looks like now. What was she going to get on her backside?

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by Anonymous11/12/14

Very hot stuff!

I agree with the other review that pictures would be great! I also think it would have been hotter if it had described in detail the taking of her virginity. Otherwise, it was very sexy! Thank you for sharing it.

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by Anonymous04/07/17

I am a sissy cum slut of a man

And I wish I were her. 4yourpleasureiam

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by Anonymous02/09/18

Enthralling fantasy

....a bit on the more extreme fetish side ... mysogenistoc .... drastic but not crude. Very well written. Thank You.

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