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Quads Ch. 10

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/09/07

full circle

well the story comes full circle I have followed the story through and had actually given it up as an unfinished. My thought on that were probably like your own, How to bring it to conclusion without spoiling the story. Well not entirely convinced it came off but ive enjoyed it and look forward to more from you in the future regards the rating is for this segment only overall I rate it 85% thanks again

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by Anonymous09/09/07

Wowsers!!

it would be awesome if you did a continuation of of the Quads' Kids!!!!

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by 09/09/07

Good Ending

I did like this story although I would have preferred more character development and less partner swapping. So the best way to have twins or triplets or quads is to get pregnant by a relative? hehe

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by Anonymous09/22/07

Excellent

Loved reading this story, and I agree with another comment I saw on here, you should definitely write about their kids.

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by Anonymous10/10/07

ENDING

Thank you for a nice ending to a lovely story

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by Anonymous10/14/07

oh my god!

this story was soooooooo great you should keep writing

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by Anonymous12/28/07

Amazing!

This is one hell of a series! Never seen anything like it and am really impressed! Many thanks for the entertainment, keep it up!

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by Anonymous12/31/07

WOW

fukin amazin! of all the stories/series on this site i hv read this was the best. iv followed quads frm the start and all of them were fukin brilliant. thanks for the stories and i agree u should write about the kids!

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by Anonymous04/11/08

kool

I loved it it was a great read. Towards the end it got a bit boring as it was the same people but then thats what happens in a story doesn't it.

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by Anonymous06/27/08

You Rock

it was the best i've ever read.it was very good so good i can't even't explain how good it was,but please write more i loved it and so did my friends,you are a very good writer .keep writing you rock.

love your story

And future one's 2 come

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by Jena12108/03/08

Quads?

I loved the series - and have given you a 100 rating - BUT when will people learn that pregnant women DO NOT have milk in the breasts until the baby is 1-2 days old - as a mother of 7 and an registered nurse in obstetrics - this is one thing I do know - otherwise - the series was really very good - thanks a lot - Jena121

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by Jena12108/03/08

Quads?

I loved the series - and have given you a 100 rating - BUT when will people learn that pregnant women DO NOT have milk in the breasts until the baby is 1-2 days old - as a mother of 7 and an registered nurse in obstetrics - this is one thing I do know - otherwise - the series was really very good - thanks a lot - Jena121

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by Anonymous11/05/08

AMAZING!!

I followed it from beginning to end and the whole time i was soaking wet, and couldn't stop reading. nice work, i hope to see more stories.

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by Anonymous11/05/08

great!

amazing story. only the party chapter was fucked up. 100%(no more man-man sex tho.) that is all.

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by Anonymous01/21/09

Amazing!!!!!!

Incredible story. You're a very talented writer.

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by Anonymous05/06/09

no way!!!!

this cant be the end!! you have to keep it going mabye like a spin off with the kids? anyway i will wait with crossed fingers for more. you are a great writer if u took out the porn youd be a great legit author! u kick ass!!!!!!

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by Anonymous06/26/09

Awesome

Great series!!!!!!

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by Anonymous09/15/09

great improvement from chaptr 6.

i totaly love this series hope you continue it on to let us kno what haended to the rest of the children.

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by Anonymous09/26/09

Not quite done

The comment title has a double meaning. On one hand I do think that the children of the original six should have some kind of story, sorry blame the modern film industry that has sequels for everything. I am still steaming 10 years later that Star Trek: Voyager ended like it did with no epilogue of what happened t the character. The second being I was so engrossed with reading this tale that this is the only comment for the whole story I have left so far, I will have to reread it sometime and finish them up. Great writing!

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by Anonymous03/17/10

awesome

my comment is not about this one but ALL OFF THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They were awesome and i might look you up again for some pointers cause i'm thinking of making some storys of my own

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by Anonymous05/10/10

praise

i found you story to be outstanding keep up the good work

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by Anonymous08/14/11

Unrealistic

Interesting but very unrealistic... that much inbreeding would produce some very unhealthy results.

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by Anonymous08/14/11

This was a great story I could not comment before as all I wanted to do was go to the next chapter i hope you will post more stories as I look forward to reading them too.
Thank you for taking the time to write them.

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by Bambi_Doe03/15/13

The babies the quads have together will all be retards. Its no way the kids will come out normal. They don't have a chance poor things. Their DNA is to close basically the same the kid won't have enough chromosomes.

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by Anonymous01/13/14

love it

Great series. The guys should have kept on sucking cock though, nothing wrong with sucking some cock now and then. I wish that the parents would have gotten in on the sex with them all .

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by Anonymous08/08/14

Amazing

Nice series. Wish would continue on to see how the children would grow up to be like!

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by Anonymous04/12/15

short story aobut telling the kids

would love a short story where the kids are told about their family three wouldn't have to include incest sex just would like to see you write a story where they learn about their family.

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by TheOldRomantic09/09/16

Great story, but...

This story is great and hot, but out of my limits, specially chapter 6.
I don`t agree with all the tale, but I recognized is a stunning story.
I think is excessive lust and poor love between the six.
Of coarse, this is only my opinion.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

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by Olebill01/15/17

Great

Loved it and when parents found out and said that they were not to keep swapping thought Stephanie and Shawn would be tighter and Shane and Stacy maybe move away after graduation to live their life's separate from the other couple so when they kept swapping and some others get involved.

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