by PDumbledore
well the story comes full circle I have followed the story through and had actually given it up as an unfinished. My thought on that were probably like your own, How to bring it to conclusion without spoiling the story. Well not entirely convinced it came off but ive enjoyed it and look forward to more from you in the future regards the rating is for this segment only overall I rate it 85% thanks again
it would be awesome if you did a continuation of of the Quads' Kids!!!!
I did like this story although I would have preferred more character development and less partner swapping. So the best way to have twins or triplets or quads is to get pregnant by a relative? hehe
Loved reading this story, and I agree with another comment I saw on here, you should definitely write about their kids.
This is one hell of a series! Never seen anything like it and am really impressed! Many thanks for the entertainment, keep it up!
fukin amazin! of all the stories/series on this site i hv read this was the best. iv followed quads frm the start and all of them were fukin brilliant. thanks for the stories and i agree u should write about the kids!
I loved it it was a great read. Towards the end it got a bit boring as it was the same people but then thats what happens in a story doesn't it.
it was the best i've ever read.it was very good so good i can't even't explain how good it was,but please write more i loved it and so did my friends,you are a very good writer .keep writing you rock.
love your story
And future one's 2 come
I loved the series - and have given you a 100 rating - BUT when will people learn that pregnant women DO NOT have milk in the breasts until the baby is 1-2 days old - as a mother of 7 and an registered nurse in obstetrics - this is one thing I do know - otherwise - the series was really very good - thanks a lot - Jena121
I loved the series - and have given you a 100 rating - BUT when will people learn that pregnant women DO NOT have milk in the breasts until the baby is 1-2 days old - as a mother of 7 and an registered nurse in obstetrics - this is one thing I do know - otherwise - the series was really very good - thanks a lot - Jena121
I followed it from beginning to end and the whole time i was soaking wet, and couldn't stop reading. nice work, i hope to see more stories.
amazing story. only the party chapter was fucked up. 100%(no more man-man sex tho.) that is all.
this cant be the end!! you have to keep it going mabye like a spin off with the kids? anyway i will wait with crossed fingers for more. you are a great writer if u took out the porn youd be a great legit author! u kick ass!!!!!!
i totaly love this series hope you continue it on to let us kno what haended to the rest of the children.
The comment title has a double meaning. On one hand I do think that the children of the original six should have some kind of story, sorry blame the modern film industry that has sequels for everything. I am still steaming 10 years later that Star Trek: Voyager ended like it did with no epilogue of what happened t the character. The second being I was so engrossed with reading this tale that this is the only comment for the whole story I have left so far, I will have to reread it sometime and finish them up. Great writing!
my comment is not about this one but ALL OFF THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They were awesome and i might look you up again for some pointers cause i'm thinking of making some storys of my own
Interesting but very unrealistic... that much inbreeding would produce some very unhealthy results.
This was a great story I could not comment before as all I wanted to do was go to the next chapter i hope you will post more stories as I look forward to reading them too.
Thank you for taking the time to write them.
The babies the quads have together will all be retards. Its no way the kids will come out normal. They don't have a chance poor things. Their DNA is to close basically the same the kid won't have enough chromosomes.
Great series. The guys should have kept on sucking cock though, nothing wrong with sucking some cock now and then. I wish that the parents would have gotten in on the sex with them all .
Nice series. Wish would continue on to see how the children would grow up to be like!
would love a short story where the kids are told about their family three wouldn't have to include incest sex just would like to see you write a story where they learn about their family.
This story is great and hot, but out of my limits, specially chapter 6.
I don`t agree with all the tale, but I recognized is a stunning story.
I think is excessive lust and poor love between the six.
Of coarse, this is only my opinion.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.
Loved it and when parents found out and said that they were not to keep swapping thought Stephanie and Shawn would be tighter and Shane and Stacy maybe move away after graduation to live their life's separate from the other couple so when they kept swapping and some others get involved.
They kept swapping so perhaps Stacies babies were actually jacks or something. I connect with Shawn I hate anal and of those people Stacy would be my last pick to fuck.
Thank you for a wonderful story, and the diversity of your characters actions. The only thing better than feeling all the differing textures of someone's openings is to feel the difference in others from them. True diversity is texture, not color.
Just thought it was worth mentioning, in the light of Bambi's comments that identical twins are always of the same sex. So here we have either 4 fraternal twins or two pairs of identical twins. If a mother regularly drops 4 eggs every month menapause is going to come mighty early. In principle, the gene soup between two fraternal twins may be sufficient. Though to be fair, the mutation clock will wind down a lot faster. If you run a sequel, you may have to consider outsourcing fatherhood. Perhaps Norman's kids - nice bit of revenge irony.
an interesting fact is they could be identical twins the two males and two females could be the result of two eggs dropping then both eggs splitting into identical twins each or it could be any combination like multiple eggs another fascinating thing the babies of the siblings could actually have different fathers in a rare thing where two eggs are dropped and each is hit by sperm from different people