All Comments on 'I Hate Her! Ch. 02'

by pjonkml

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
wow

that was great nicely done

Firerocket67Firerocket67almost 15 years ago
Amazing

I would love for you to make another one, maybe for when they get married or something, I don't think I can bare for this to be the end so soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
fantastic!

u shud definitely make another one!

SilverMidnightSilverMidnightover 14 years ago
Another Please

i love the drama these characters come across as and there love. I would love to see them go deeper and see a future for them. please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Awesome

That was a great story , please write more about them

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

please please write more these two are great together

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
perfect!

i loved the drama these 2 characters went through and the love. please write more stories about them!

dazzleredd41dazzleredd41over 10 years ago
wow

im glad jamie was able to see melissa for what she was and that she was strong in her love for dee to fight for her girl ex gfs can not be friends especially if your in a relationship and its a great relationship at that WAY TO GO JAMIE

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice tale but...

Pjonkml, I loved your 'Terry' stories and so approached this one with high hopes. It's a nice enough short story but I thought it ended a little too abruptly. You could certainly have played the drama and wound up tension for another page or so. I've given four stars but 'I Hate Her!' would have merited five if you had given it that little extra.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Couldn't agree more

I completely agree with the previous comment. I loved the two Terry stories and have read both several times. This one was good but it could have done with a little more build up---the drama was there for the asking but you resolved it far too abruptly. Still, you are an enjoyable story-teller, always a pleasure to read.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 7 years ago
Wonderful!

I love love. This story speaks to me of love, above all else. Thank you so very much for sharing it with us!

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