by pjonkml
I would love for you to make another one, maybe for when they get married or something, I don't think I can bare for this to be the end so soon!
i love the drama these characters come across as and there love. I would love to see them go deeper and see a future for them. please continue.
i loved the drama these 2 characters went through and the love. please write more stories about them!
im glad jamie was able to see melissa for what she was and that she was strong in her love for dee to fight for her girl ex gfs can not be friends especially if your in a relationship and its a great relationship at that WAY TO GO JAMIE
Pjonkml, I loved your 'Terry' stories and so approached this one with high hopes. It's a nice enough short story but I thought it ended a little too abruptly. You could certainly have played the drama and wound up tension for another page or so. I've given four stars but 'I Hate Her!' would have merited five if you had given it that little extra.
I completely agree with the previous comment. I loved the two Terry stories and have read both several times. This one was good but it could have done with a little more build up---the drama was there for the asking but you resolved it far too abruptly. Still, you are an enjoyable story-teller, always a pleasure to read.
I love love. This story speaks to me of love, above all else. Thank you so very much for sharing it with us!