Wonderful, I could really believe it's a true story.
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Anonymous09/10/07
Did you get
Did you get her out you selfish bastard? If you didn’t, I won’t read another of your stories! Maybe she’s still there! There’s still time! I can’t stand it.
She probably owns a Commie boutique by now.
by
Anonymous07/12/09
Wasn't this a movie?
Or the plot of a movie? I assume it was a fairly common occurrence in Vietnam.
by
Anonymous01/11/11
Best of class
Marvelously written. And you nailed the interracial aspect, which makes it even hotter. More like this!
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Loved it
Wonderful, I could really believe it's a true story.
Did you get
Did you get her out you selfish bastard? If you didn’t, I won’t read another of your stories! Maybe she’s still there! There’s still time! I can’t stand it.
She probably owns a Commie boutique by now.
Wasn't this a movie?
Or the plot of a movie? I assume it was a fairly common occurrence in Vietnam.
Best of class
Marvelously written. And you nailed the interracial aspect, which makes it even hotter. More like this!
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