Since this is the only chapter I read, and the wife makes such blatant statewments to her husband with no respect for his wishes or desires, it is obvious she must go. And he gave her a tremendous sendoff. Having her lovers prints on the bottle by the tub and his prints on the dryer as well as his cum in her and on her clearly gave evidence of a person of interest if needed. This is a story a lot of adulterous wives who think they control their husbands should read and consider. Little small things could easily stop them from their actions and from getting anything from the marriage. Hail to the victor!
Enjoyed it all the way through and the ending was super. Did you notice all of the critics have departed the theatre? They can't handle it when their expectations are not fulfilled. Waiting for the next one. PW
A High Potential, Faultless Ending to the Story...
Ch. 04 sure surprised me - great twist on what appeared to be a standard cuck story. Of course IRL a GFI would have resulted in a different outcome.
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Anonymous09/11/07
Illustration Of Loss
Hardly anyone left around to fairly and constructively comment huh. Just the numb jaded sick self cucksters without any self respect - like you writer.
The illustration alledged to was the continuous waste of talent for the so very few like you into slef humiliation. It must be frustrating for you to have but the dregs of subhuman scum around at the end. But then you chose the arena didn't you pathetic one.
So sadly sick. Get some help little one.
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Anonymous09/11/07
Can't get more stupid or dumber than this
when spent so much nonsense, dear author? it's total gibberish nonsense.
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Anonymous09/11/07
Yes!!!
Great ending! These type stories usually leave me sad inside. This one was a wonderfully shocking surprise! :-) I really prefer it when the man gets revenge. Well done.
Thanks for your varied encouragements & criticisms, I love it all. I do find it interesting though, that the concept of infidelity should attract so much more intense condemnation than murder. A suitably intriguing subject for a story perhaps?
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Anonymous09/06/08
in the end...
was she made aware of the why ? did she know the why ? her behavior can have terminal impact
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Anonymous03/05/09
I was right
Clayton loves the cock so much he wrote a story involving the killing of the "loving wife," who was getting in the way of his goal, namely the consumation of his gay love. Damnit man, couldn't he just have gotten a divorce, waxed his ass and moved to san fran like the rest of the felchers? The moral of this story is clear...don't get between Clayton and a hard dick!
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Anonymous11/01/09
Perfect
The best
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Anonymous11/17/09
deserving end
people seldom get what they deserve, but here, the lesson, be careful whom you tick off
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Anonymous11/17/09
Didn't read the other chapters
But this one was very good. I liked the ending. It's apity that not all wives/sluts/whores don't end up this way.
Not bad. The wife gave an electrifying performance at the end. One little glitch; all the DNA evidence includes hubby's DNA when he climaxed just before his wife died. Won't the cops be a little perplexed by the semen from hubby on the floor, right next to the deceased? How would hubby explain that one? It could look a bit perverse, what with her pussy oozing a different DNA flavor from Dave's cum . . . Despite this, the ending saved the story by showing the reader that hubby wasn't quite as accepting as he appeared. Thanks for writing.
Nice twist! It is very interesting that when she was cheating everyone is outraged and ready to spit fire, but when she is murdered every is saying what a good story it is. It seems that our moral compass doesn't point north. It was a very interesting twist and I did not see it coming.
English
Ends with a shock
Punishment for a life lived too selfishly.
She enjoyed the most shocking event of her life.
Since this is the only chapter I read, and the wife makes such blatant statewments to her husband with no respect for his wishes or desires, it is obvious she must go. And he gave her a tremendous sendoff. Having her lovers prints on the bottle by the tub and his prints on the dryer as well as his cum in her and on her clearly gave evidence of a person of interest if needed. This is a story a lot of adulterous wives who think they control their husbands should read and consider. Little small things could easily stop them from their actions and from getting anything from the marriage. Hail to the victor!
Oh wow
Got me completely. Never saw it coming.
Thanks for sharing.
FINALLY! A man .
Great stroy and a even better ending!!!
Revenge is sweet...and a little crispy.
The story was ok, but the twist at the end was a total surprise. Nice Work, Clayton.
Where have all the critics gone?
Enjoyed it all the way through and the ending was super. Did you notice all of the critics have departed the theatre? They can't handle it when their expectations are not fulfilled. Waiting for the next one. PW
A High Potential, Faultless Ending to the Story...
Ch. 04 sure surprised me - great twist on what appeared to be a standard cuck story. Of course IRL a GFI would have resulted in a different outcome.
Illustration Of Loss
Hardly anyone left around to fairly and constructively comment huh. Just the numb jaded sick self cucksters without any self respect - like you writer.
The illustration alledged to was the continuous waste of talent for the so very few like you into slef humiliation. It must be frustrating for you to have but the dregs of subhuman scum around at the end. But then you chose the arena didn't you pathetic one.
So sadly sick. Get some help little one.
Can't get more stupid or dumber than this
when spent so much nonsense, dear author? it's total gibberish nonsense.
Yes!!!
Great ending! These type stories usually leave me sad inside. This one was a wonderfully shocking surprise! :-) I really prefer it when the man gets revenge. Well done.
Chastised by the righteous
Thanks for your varied encouragements & criticisms, I love it all. I do find it interesting though, that the concept of infidelity should attract so much more intense condemnation than murder. A suitably intriguing subject for a story perhaps?
in the end...
was she made aware of the why ? did she know the why ? her behavior can have terminal impact
I was right
Clayton loves the cock so much he wrote a story involving the killing of the "loving wife," who was getting in the way of his goal, namely the consumation of his gay love. Damnit man, couldn't he just have gotten a divorce, waxed his ass and moved to san fran like the rest of the felchers? The moral of this story is clear...don't get between Clayton and a hard dick!
Perfect
The best
deserving end
people seldom get what they deserve, but here, the lesson, be careful whom you tick off
Didn't read the other chapters
But this one was very good. I liked the ending. It's apity that not all wives/sluts/whores don't end up this way.
Just discovered this series . . .
Not bad. The wife gave an electrifying performance at the end. One little glitch; all the DNA evidence includes hubby's DNA when he climaxed just before his wife died. Won't the cops be a little perplexed by the semen from hubby on the floor, right next to the deceased? How would hubby explain that one? It could look a bit perverse, what with her pussy oozing a different DNA flavor from Dave's cum . . . Despite this, the ending saved the story by showing the reader that hubby wasn't quite as accepting as he appeared. Thanks for writing.
SHOULDNT FEED THE CATS
info on proposals, say good nite Coquette. TK U MLJ LV NV
What?
What a twist!
Nice ending
Nice twist! It is very interesting that when she was cheating everyone is outraged and ready to spit fire, but when she is murdered every is saying what a good story it is. It seems that our moral compass doesn't point north. It was a very interesting twist and I did not see it coming.
Don't get it
He could have dropped that hair dryer in on her three chapters ago.
Wow!
Just wow!
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