by garcher27
And I also loved my younger sister who is no longer with us.A LAWMAN.
The only bit I did not like was the anal,otherwise a great plausible story.
pretty stupid--Since it apparently contained ANAL I'm happy that I did
ANAL! On a sex site?! O, the horror! Get over it and off your high horse. Myself, I liked the idea of the anal, but the way it was portrayed was crude and unrealistic. Other than that, interesting idea.
If you don't like anal don't read it, but don't mark a story down for it. What do you think this site is here for?
A good story, a nice twist but not quite enough description of the sex in my view. Maybe drawing out that part and the sensations they felt could have worked well.