Haunted Ch. 02

ALRIGHTY THEN!!

U HAVE ME HOOKED ON THIS STORY..ITS A GOOD CLIFFHANGER..HURRY WITH THE NEXT PART..I LIKE IT VERY MUCH..DONT LEAVE IT THERE..SMILE..THANKS!

Wow! Good start! go on ASAP!!! Please!

GRRRR

yep your superb.. please PRETTY PLEASE hurry up with the next chap. considering of the suspence and the strange turn about i was hooked. i would have ya a 200 but the rate thingy dont go that fair ( laughs ) well anyway please start typeing the next one cant wait for what happens. ..-LJ
P.S will be cheaking every week now for that story

really liked it

really like it i was hoping for more. and i like the fact he is big these stories allways turn me on

Exceptional...

One of my favorite subjects is the eighteenth century, and the intrigue of the ghostly endeavors of vapored spirits... Very nice

I loved it!

You set the stage and pulled me in from the very beginning. I would love to see another chapter or two of this story and I look forward to more of your writing. Fantastic work, Randolph!

More please !

I read Ch 1, and was hoping for a complete Ch 2. Please hurry back with more!

Unbelievable!

You tease.
Hurry back with the next installment!

How long must we wait for Chapter 3?

>weg< ... patience is NOT one of my virtues. You must find time to write the next installment, my dear. Your audience is growing.

What Wicked Said

Yes, how long until the next installment? Engaging writing, very well done...

I'm hooked!

Can't wait for Chapter 3!

I join the choir...

Could you please make a start on the second part?

Well written, nice descriptions and to top it all: a plot!

Your detail ...

Is amazing! I could feel the chill and see.each steamy detail. I look forward to chapter three! My.only request is that if you do it in the samr format,could you put a mark so i can just pick up where i left off?

and now I'm haunted...

Your words drew a picture for my mind ti see...now I too, am haunted...Kellee