All Comments on 'Soccer Mom Maria'

the main charecter is beautifully draw . She is descrined from inside and outside successfully enough to make us believe .Plot progresses in interesting and convincing way that making the readget more involved , more hot , sharing Maria's her raw powerful kinky desires .

loved the story. very descriptive, and nice teasing before the sex with the car wash. would love to see the story continued with the daughters being involved as add-ins or by themselves. could make a few chapters with smoking hot Maria. keep up the good work

Freaking hot story.. Would love to see this continued.Hopefully with the daughters added in as well.. You just have to love how the men are using Maria...

I hope you will do at least one chapter and have Maria's daughters join in the fun

JOAN @ The JERSEY SHORE

I agree with Joan from the Jersey Shore..have her daughters and the other daughetrs join in. Maybe a daddy swap party?

This is a great story. It made my dick so hard. Keep on writing, I enjoyed it very much.

Mark

Great story! I've read a couple of your other stories, and I noticed you mix up felt and left a lot. Getting an editor would help with that. But your stories are fucking hot! Keep up the good work!

Wow where do i sign up at!!! I would love to dresss my slut team mom up sexy and take her to a soccer meeting where shes used and passed a around like a whore as i sit and watch the dads gangbang her and video tape her so she can watch it with me later!!! ♡★☆★♡♡

Nice story. Hot. Maria might have flipped too quickly from "soccer mom" to wanton whore, but it was easy to follow the way it was written.

A follow-up -- She shows up at the next meeting, and her daughter is there, to receive a "booster club" trophy. And we all know what that trophy is going to be! Or, someone tries to use the tape against Maria, and says they'll give it to her, if she brings her large-breasted daughter to the next meeting!

Well-written! I am still rock hard. Love the addition of anal sex. The consensus is correct - add the 18 yr old daughter. Also some les action between the two women would be the icing on the cake!

Great story Erica. I loved every bit of it. Gave me so many naughty thoughts and ideas of people I know that I can't get out of my mind now. Hahah. Thanks for those thoughts.

B

i like it it should go on.....

A good story but calling a Mexican whore was racist bullshit.