Well written coming of age story of a new young gyrl.
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Anonymous12/25/12
Well done
I have to say this was a very good story. Well done on all the details and pacing and the time taken to give the excitement of Jesse to build. You captured the exhilaration and worrisome humiliation of being caught beautifully. I hope you keep writing stories as good as this one.
Thanks, -S-
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Anonymous09/22/14
Gender Quest
Realistic, thrilling and tense exploration of gender choices. Written with sensitivity about the hopes, joys and doubts. Thanks for sharing.
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Discovering New Desires
Great presentation of the emotions of experiencing fulfillment of sexual urges for the first time.
Sensitive and Insightful
Sweet tale of the traumas and delights of sexual exploration and discovery.
Sweet blossoming
Well written coming of age story of a new young gyrl.
Well done
I have to say this was a very good story. Well done on all the details and pacing and the time taken to give the excitement of Jesse to build. You captured the exhilaration and worrisome humiliation of being caught beautifully. I hope you keep writing stories as good as this one.
Thanks, -S-
Gender Quest
Realistic, thrilling and tense exploration of gender choices. Written with sensitivity about the hopes, joys and doubts. Thanks for sharing.
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