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Belle and Beau

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/14/07

Please when is the next chapter coming!

I was so enthralled in this story that when I reached the last paragragh and realized there was no more I literally yelled OMG! The beginning of this story is wonderful...full of potential between these two characters. Love Beau's southern bad boy charm and Belle's hard to get, saucy attitude. Can't wait to read what happens next and how this story develops.

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by 09/15/07

Eekk!

I want more. Thats a fantastic story. I want more please. You need to continue the story.

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by Anonymous09/15/07

good but too short

It's a great set up; interesting characters and enticing dynamic. Put more into the next chapter, make it longer or just submit the whole story. You're going to turn people off if you keep giving them little bites like this. The sex scene could have had more as well; I thought it was a very important part of their early relationship and you just glossed over it.

Still, I can't wait to read more and it's very good :-D

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by KokopelliRises09/15/07

More please...

I love the set-up but I would like to read the whole story.

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by Anonymous01/15/08

More, more, more!!!!!

Finish this story! It is a wonderful start!

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Don't you dare!

Don't you dare leave that story unfinished! Such a great start! It's cruel and unusual punishment!

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by rbgirlslovedirt08/05/10

please write some more! i know you wrote this a while ago but im interested to see how this turns out. :)

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