All Comments on 'Unexpected Encounter'

More like four or five, typically.

Very good story....I've been blessed to be with older women and they are experienced and wonderful lovers. Can't wait to read more of your adventures

Very good let's have more.

already in my top 10.there writers on this site writing yrs. and not as good as your story.so get ready they're a jealous group,nit picky and english 101 assholes.trying to hold you back.

Really good stuff. Good background and descripions. Cant wait to read the next segments.

Great Story - keep up the good work - look forward to more!

Dont Give Up Your Day Job.You are no Jack Straw.You do the name a disservice writting this crappy story.

all in all, a good story. i would suggest not worrying about what people think of your motives and just write the best you can; some will get off on it, some will enjoy the literature aspect, some will think you're a prick for doing it no matter what you do or say so ignore them and enjoy yourself - and let us enjoy what you have to share.

You may not be Jack Straw, but you've got some talent. Keep writing. Don't let the critics hold you back. We need more writers like you. Luis

You told the tale well; I felt like I was right there through the entire story. I'm curious why she had shaved her pussy or if she ever told you the reason. Perhaps her original motive for coming over to see you was to enjoy this "tete e' tete" you had ~ and forget about life for a while. She had, after all, been through too much trauma to think about. I'll bet the series of encounters, after this first one, are even hotter than the first. I hope you'll continue to write. Ron

I thought it was well written, nice descriptions, and sounds like the satisfaction was very mutual. Ignore the nay sayers - there are always killjoys around.

no problem with you making the lady feel wanted again

You can aum make me feel better any time you want!

Fuck the people that didn't like it,It made me very wet. My hubby will get lucky tonight. Please keep the story's and me cumming!!!!

This was good. Real good. Please do this site and its readers a favor: Conrinue with the next chapters.

You have some talent so keep writing and you should improve. I don't understand taking another writers name and adding a 2 too it as he is an established writer and you are attempting to take from him. I don't know why you are doing this, stand on your own works and abilities.<P>Good luck<P>PT

Read more...write less.

Keep on writing. I have enjoyed the story very much and longed for a relationship with such mature bbw.

How about telling us what other stuff she liked and how you got her to do those things?

Wish you were my neighbor!

It's nice that you could be such a nice neighbor in her time of need. Only question, did you ever contact your Dad with her request for help? Good story, looking forward to chapter two.