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by Anonymous

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by Alephenia09/14/07

That was great

Very clever, a lot of fun to read! Thanks for that!

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by Amyfriend09/17/07

Very funny...

and a very light hearted rare approach to the greedy little girl that needed more than 8"... Well done.

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by Anonymous09/23/07

Too Bad....

For Her!!! Funny Poem, Keep writing. Thanks, D.

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