by you_horny_biotch
That was perfect in so many ways. The pussy on pussy, the brother/sister, the knowledge that they shouldn't do it but can't help themselves....
PLEASE write more!
This almost should be Mind Control. Gina is definitely in control of two very happy sibling. Hope youo send us another story soon
that was sensational... it's been a long time since i read such a well-paced story, good lead-up and pay-off, clean and simple characterisation. and of course, the story is hot hot hot...
sibling incest can be hard to put into a realistic context and this story worked for me. parent-teenager incest stories are fairly common and formulaic, sibling incest usually comes down to "older sibling comes home from college and teaches younger sibling some new tricks". this story isn't original (there aren't that many originaly stories anyway, really) but it's an AWESOME riff on a reliable tune and i'm keenly - KEENLY - interested to see where you_horny_biotch goes from here.
add one more fan to the list!
Loved it...keep on writing!
Simply put...
One of the hottest stories I've read in quite a long time. Good job!
Great story.
If im picking i would have liked a bit more build up but apart from that one of the best I have read for a while.
I liked how you did not desribe the characters too much which allowed my own imagination to run wild.
Write more please a Part II brother takes sis with Gina. Nice writing good job mmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!!!
Please continue this story! It was wonderfully done and very descriptive! Very easy to imagine the action as you described it!
I really enjoyed this! This is aan extremly exciting story! Keep up the great work!
I really enjoyed this! This is aan extremly exciting story! Keep up the great work!
That was so freakin hot, one of the best things that I've read in a long time. It may have been short but is sure as hell was sweet... all the different positions, the buildups to the climaxes, describing the threesome, the girl on girl/pussy on pussy, MY GOD.
Sequel PLEASE!
luved it! ilove stories where siblings are 1st introduced to incest in such a hot way! gina is my hero!
Great story! Well written - few typos and grammar which should have been spell-checked - but exceptionally good otherwise.
Don't need a sequel - I've already imagined and enjoyed about 10 of them - WELL DONE!!
That was so very hot. I'll admit it definitely had an effect on me. More please.
The actual seduction & aftermath was perfunctory, but it it seems no one cares. What the author chose to cover was done superbly.but to me, there's tangible room for improvement.