by Freddyj881
a story where the loving pair actually respect, communicate and honor each other. what a shocker! is this allowed?
It takes someone who has talent to write about hot spousal with a degree of self and other respect.<P>
You did all that - I liked the story, the arousal and the characters.<P>
You Author - are appreciated with hopes for more.
A really erotic story, what a wife! Do you have more of the same? If so please share as you are an extremely talanted writter.
I like the way you put the husband as too afraid of hurting her by pushing the subject of his fantasy. Like so many people no real to the point conversation as it might just be a threatening conversation and who needs that. Yes, this is more like real life and that is sad.<P>Nice story of romance and love. Keep writing.<P>PT
OK, afraid or ashamed to ask her for a blowjob. But, did you give her an example by going down and eating her pussy to climax? Or is that "too dirty" for her?
Great Writing!! I love this series..please write more about her sexual adventures!
Great job getting started with this story. This could really be a fantastic series. It has potential for this couple to develop into a really hot pair. Don't let the negative naybobs get in your way. Write what you like to write.
great story , were well written ; like the way he's asking her to cum on her face ;
I have always wanted to cum in my wife's mouth but she would rather have it all over her face. She says it works wonders for her complexion and it certainly does - she is an absoutely gorgeous woman!
yOU WRITE WHAT i LONG FOR BUT MY WIFE IS JUST NOT AS INTERESTE AND ENTHUSIASTIC AS YOUR WONDERFUL LADY.
I knew I'd enjoy this by the title, great job, great ending,
Good start to the series, and well-written as well. My only concern was in the beginning when I really thought the husband was coming across like someone had cut his balls of and hidden them somewhere. His bride was the virgin but he acts like one even after 7 years of marriage, previous girlfriends and porn.
WTF were they doiing on their honeymoon and afterwards for seven years. Did they have sex. Katie is now a cum slut and I'm happy for her.
She's a quick study!
I was hoping you'd permit her a few 'mistakes' or refusals.
So: It's much too glib for a first timer.