All Comments on 'My Hot Wife Katie Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good story

A story for most all husbands.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
good loving wives tale

a story where the loving pair actually respect, communicate and honor each other. what a shocker! is this allowed?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
tasteful

excellent submission, it didn't suck in a bad way!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Quite A Pulsing Start - Good Show

It takes someone who has talent to write about hot spousal with a degree of self and other respect.<P>

You did all that - I liked the story, the arousal and the characters.<P>

You Author - are appreciated with hopes for more.

droogedroogeover 16 years ago
First class

A really erotic story, what a wife! Do you have more of the same? If so please share as you are an extremely talanted writter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good story

Good story understanding wife does what husband wants

peggytwittypeggytwittyover 16 years ago
Neat little story

I like the way you put the husband as too afraid of hurting her by pushing the subject of his fantasy. Like so many people no real to the point conversation as it might just be a threatening conversation and who needs that. Yes, this is more like real life and that is sad.<P>Nice story of romance and love. Keep writing.<P>PT

brfinestbrfinestover 16 years ago
Very Hot

OK, afraid or ashamed to ask her for a blowjob. But, did you give her an example by going down and eating her pussy to climax? Or is that "too dirty" for her?

AponeAponeabout 16 years ago
Wow!

Great Writing!! I love this series..please write more about her sexual adventures!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great Start!

Great job getting started with this story. This could really be a fantastic series. It has potential for this couple to develop into a really hot pair. Don't let the negative naybobs get in your way. Write what you like to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

great story , were well written ; like the way he's asking her to cum on her face ;

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Oh, damn

I have always wanted to cum in my wife's mouth but she would rather have it all over her face. She says it works wonders for her complexion and it certainly does - she is an absoutely gorgeous woman!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
this is LOVEwhat is reAL AND HONEST

yOU WRITE WHAT i LONG FOR BUT MY WIFE IS JUST NOT AS INTERESTE AND ENTHUSIASTIC AS YOUR WONDERFUL LADY.

LikeFineWine1LikeFineWine1over 9 years ago
A Splashing Finish

I knew I'd enjoy this by the title, great job, great ending,

BeachDrifterBeachDrifterover 7 years ago
HOT

Very HOT story...!!!!!

TrangSocTrangSocalmost 7 years ago
Nice job!!

Can hardly wait to see what Katie dies next.

huntsman29huntsman29about 5 years ago
Very good.

Good start to the series, and well-written as well. My only concern was in the beginning when I really thought the husband was coming across like someone had cut his balls of and hidden them somewhere. His bride was the virgin but he acts like one even after 7 years of marriage, previous girlfriends and porn.

rodryder44rodryder44about 5 years ago
Hot Katie Ch 1

WTF were they doiing on their honeymoon and afterwards for seven years. Did they have sex. Katie is now a cum slut and I'm happy for her.

iwishiwasiwishiwasover 3 years ago
Awesome

Love the description and your series.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Guess she's a natural.

CasyWoodsCasyWoodsover 1 year ago

Amazing, I wish you could share this with my Wife.!.

Freddyj881Freddyj881about 1 year agoAuthor

We sent you an email CasyWoods!

JollyrogeringJollyrogering5 months ago

She's a quick study!

I was hoping you'd permit her a few 'mistakes' or refusals.

So: It's much too glib for a first timer.

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A husband/wife team who love to write about our sex lives, fantasies, or a combination! We aren't trying to be the next Shades of Grey but use writing erotica to expand our own sexual gratification. Email us at katiekcjackson@gmail.com

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