by columfa
I very nearly self ignited while reading this scorching erotic Ch,I have really enjoyed ALL the previous Chs,and look forward to more .Thanks a million.
You are committed now - all your fans want this story to go on for ever - so you cannot stop - there are so many ways to develop it - and we want to see them all
This chapter fits the plot very nicely. After reading the comments to the previous chapter (mine was the second or the third) I just want to clarify that I didn´t like the end not because I am homophobic, that I am not, but because I thought that Max was developing into a self-confident and dominant male while Gus or Angela were less in control so I thought that the other way around (they submitting to Max) was more logical and appealing (at least for me). I still think that option is possible. Anyway, I agree it´s columfa´s story and his/her choice.
Moms shagging sons dads playing with daughters sons sucking dads but then I am very disgusting myself.
My problem with the ending of the previous story wasn't with the sexual acts involved, though they weren't my cup of, er, tea...
But that the mother and father's collusion on the method of shifting Max off his high-horse (which could have been accomplished in any number of creative ways) lacked any prior history or motivation. Why would Gus, a pre-eminiently heterosexual guy, from all that had gone before (well, okay, other than that perverse nigh-subconscious urge to have his wife act the slut with her son), suddenly decide that having his cock sucked by a man was the best way to accomplish the deflation of Max's ego?
And, likewise, why would the Mom, so set on boosting her son's heterosexual confidence, suddenly want to see him subordinated to Gus, not just as a pack-male to the alpha, but in an explicitly homosexual way.
This particular method simply seemed to violate the established premises and personalities.
But, OF COURSE, it's Columfa's story, so he can jerk us around as he sees fit.
And, as long as the story remains--in general--as hot as this segment was, we'll probably suck it right down!
Glad that some of us are commenting on every chapter. Beginning to feel that one a day is not enough but have a very aching cock as had to start from the first instalment again! Obviously I am not the only one to want to comment on each chapter - fully deserved praise again for an author who fully understands the difference between porn stories and true erotica. Brilliant!!! Dickus63 UK
"You touching yourself," she heard.
"Yeah," a soft girlish tone.
"Awesome. Me, too," he replied.
"Cool."
LOL
I loved the phone sex. That is one of the hottest things ever. Especially if it's actually with your mom or sister.
man this is the kind of thing for jerking over - if only it was real! i blew heaps at each chapter and will do it each time i reread it
Nice comeback in this chapter......you can take a punch....keep em cumming!
wonder why there are no complaints here when taking advantage of an innocent young lady