All Comments on 'Dark Desires Ch. 02'

Now, who could that be watching from the shadows? What could be better than relations between a vampire and a succubus? I guess we'll have to wait and see.

-Sara

I love this story line. Can't wait to read who is watching, will there be a threesome? MMF or FFM or VS??

I agree as well! I love this story line! The sex is amazing! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks

...there were a lot of little grammatical errors that distracted me from really enjoying the story. The first chapter of this story was edited better. Please edit the next chapter because it's a very good story and i would love to read more without being offput with editing issues.

Once again I love this story. Can't wait to read more.

That was amazing!! I freaking love vampires! Have you read Esmerelda? It's another story about a vamp and a succubus. But I so love this a lot more! Please write a chapter 3 and so on and so on!

I just found this story and I loved it! Please hurry up with chapter 3! I can't wait!

write more chapters! It's sooo good!

I love this story! When is the next chapter coming up?

Omg your writing is ah-mazing hurry and write the next one im totally on the edge of my seat

Please please please make the next one im so bagging you i cant wait its leaving me on the edge of my seat pretty pretty please with a vampire on top dont wait so long to post the next storys your an awesome writer!!!

Totally love this series but its taking way to long and i really wanna see what happens but now im not evan sure if your giving up on this or not?????????????

Are you still writeing?????????????????????????

I did plan to continue this story but I am afraid I am having serious writer's block with it. I am also very busy with real life so I do not have a lot of time to write. I will try in the next couple of weeks to get something written. If I don't I am very sorry and I want to thank you for the positive feedback you give to it.

-Lila

Someone else should just finish writing it. I hat ewhen people dont finish what they start!

I have read this several times...waiting for more!!! Think you will revisit?

I hope so....great characters.

I can't believe you gave up on this series! It was one of the best on this site, and you didn't even finish it... :/

Looking forward to the next installment.

ummmm Good!!