All Comments on 'The Sick Zak Course of My Life Ch. 01'

Loved your description of the girl's conflicting feelings. The character is too good to let go now. You must take this story further.

Such a well-written beginning shouldn't be abandoned. More of her development, please!

Yet another scorching story from you, and the thought that this could just be the beginning of her story, just makes me extremely happy. I will be here at my computer the very day Ch. 02 is published. I'll be checking every day until then.

THANK YOU for your work.

Excellent start. More, please.

this is an excellent start indeed. please continue it!

More, please! I have to hear what happens next, and what Anika and her uncle do.

How soon can we expect the next chapter(s). Loved it.

hey if everybody would experiment in writing like you do, I woudn't have any time left for other fun stuff. so don't worry about the length of the story, as long as it is written so well

Very well thought out and written - lets get rid of 'Uncle" and start to include other men in her life - maybe her Dad - who will be just the opposite to her Uncle - keep writing though - its great

Your stories are written in a tone and style that no one else can seem to incorporate into their writings quite as well. I will read this story many more times in the near future!

I love the slow build of this story, the reluctance, and the genuine, realistic arousal. Very very sexy! A bit wordy in places, a bit uneven in texture... But it ultimately hits the target. Can't wait to read more!

This is an incredible story. Thank you.

great,, enticing

Stay with uncle,or sister and brothers have a 3 some,blackmailed brother blackmailed sister

So horribly wrong and yet terrifically arousing. I felt ashamed to be so turned on reading this!