All Comments on 'I Love Dick Ch. 02'

Enjoyable dialogue as always, dear. Nice buildup, funny lines and well-delineated characters. Oh, and on top of all that it was damn HOT, too!

Hey S.

The best I could give you on this one was 75%. Sorry, but I felt it didn't have anything new and it seemed unreal. On the other hand I bet your next story will surpass 100%. It would be wonderful if every thing we put our hands on turned out to be as good or better than the last but thats not real life is it!.hugs..dan

to referee your next fantasy football game. Hilarious story and so hot too.

this one sure got me "up" 1st thing in the morning. Sam D. from My Space

You did it again, girl. Another terrific story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

every single story i read of yours has me hard & smiling & wanting more

Sarah:

If they awarded a penalty flag for such an excellant

story, you'd gotten 15 yards 'stead of 15".......

boston bruce

Love that winning style! Rarely get to see my two favorite pastimes as subjects in a single story: Steelers football and fucking.

once again you have combined steeler football and sex, always a winning combination!!! i like the familiar feel, the home town touches in your stories. makes them that much more real.

keep up the good work!!

carl

I was laughing so hard my dick got limp. well I did help it along a little. your the best.

Sarahh,

You are too much, once again, great sex with great humor.

What is a Steeler,I thought it might be someone from Sheffield.YOU must be quite a girl one part in particular,if you like this much dick.Beware of Englishnen wearing REAL Rolex and driving REAL cars for example XK150S.When can I see the other tit and also ----,no thats rude do not know what came over me .The story,thats fine really fine

they call me thumper U wanna play?

and I am absolutely dumb when it comes to football. I would always lose. But then if i was playing Fantasy Football with Sarahhh, that isn't a bad thing!!!

Great story!

you score more than the Steelers did in the first 2 games. way to goo, Charlie

I havent smiled since the Skins beat the Eagles on Monday night. You need to wear an Eagles shirt and change our luck. Its all in the same state right?

Even though I am decidedly not a sports fan, I found myself reading this story with extreme interest. Thanks for writing a football story that even a non-fan could enjoy. I also have read other of your stories and loved them all.

Jim

Another great story by Miss Pittsburgh! I wish we had you done here in Miami getting our Dolphins up for the game...Keep up the good work sarahhhh.....This story was mentioned on the –Literoticas All-Time Most Votes Received Thread - today. (A thread that can be found in the STORY FEEDBACK FORUM on Literoticas Bulletin Board.../

.both Gabby and I loved it babe.

yeah this story rocks it got mine off

Sarahhh

I love dick (both stories) was awesome! I wish we could play football together! We could practice quick hits - you don't get much yardage per play but it keeps the game exciting and gets you down field into the end zone with a real sense of accomplishment.

Every time I think your stories can't possibly get any better, you always cum up with one that blows my mind. Now you've got me wondering what you have in store for chapter 3. What a HOT and well written story.

Hi

I would enjoy playing football and team up one lady for her greater satisfaction with a couple of my friends and be sure to fill all her holes.

This is kind of story i like short right to the point and no bullshit and detailes which do n not interest anybody

Francis

Saved from gang bangers and then gang banged in the barn! Great

I think in the next chapter you should play fantasy football with that other Pittsburgh pro football squad -- Pittsburgh Passion, the girls team. Kisses, Melinda

SARAHHH YOU CAN SURE WRITE SOME HOT STORIES. KEEP THEM CUMMING

I loved the new story, too bad you are so far or i think i would enjoy watching the 9er steeler game with you as i am an SF fan.

You really know how to write a sexy storie, My dick gets hard every time I read one of yours. I wish that you was here to relieve it for me. :-)

Sarahhh,

girl, i love your hometown mixture of steel and sex! in chap3 handle thumper...wish i was back home! would sure love to do a Steeler game w/you baby...the story was good also, damn! rich

This one was even hotter than the first chapter and just as humorous. I've been reading stories vociferously on this site for the past several days, and yours are the best.

Great idea for the Truck Stop series. Hott sex and even hotter fantasy. Loved the way you blended the "Fantasy Football" team with many young men's fantasy of picking up a truly HOTT chick when you stop for gas along the roadside.

I'm back to hanging out at truck stops looking for a "fair damsel in distress", especially one wearing Steeler Black and Gold.

Great story. I WANT MORE ADVENTURES OF SARAHH!! Damn girl you get around!

prop69/Al

and so do you. sorry i am a bengals fan and still bitter about our last game of the season the past 2 years. great story tho. randy in the queen city.

WOW!! YOU TOTALLY ROCK IT AND LEAVE IT TO THE IMAGINATION DONT YOU... KEEP UP WITH THE STORIES YOU ROCK!!!

Sarahhh,

This was just another wonderful story that you have authored. We are all hornier for having read it and I can only say that I want to play football with you

a little humor & much hot sex go a long way (about 9" in my case) rick the dick from my space

There is nothing like erotic stories with humor and even a plot. I can't wait for the next episode.

That was a great story to ,I think your just the type persom we need on here.

So much realism,our touch games usaually end with some titty and groping. We have fun. Sarah,I think you do. Just the best. How about updating your picture. Show us your new tits. I've seen them. Rest of world would love them too

Hot sex & high humour make such a sweet mix

Hi Sarah, another great story, when is Thumper going to get his turn, or don't you think you can accommodate him.

your i love dic story just helped me out like a mother fucker. and since i got to read your story ill tell you mine. i ve been with this girl for about 3 months and she cann't suck a dick to save her life. she started to read the story and said " ya kyle this guy soony is a lot like you , i mean your 6'5 300lbs, well endowed, you played football in high school and you did some minor mma threw the BBC, so your like the minors verson of him, so does that make me the minors verson of her."

so i said "well you cant make it to the minors cause for starters your a fucking packer fan, and when it comes to head what can i say".

so she turned away from me and starred at the computer, i thought that she was pissed so i started to get ready for work, then she getts up and walks up to me with a smile. so i ask "what are you smiling about", she grabbes me by the neck starts to kiss me throws me down in the chair andsaids " im ready to try out for the pro team". all i can say is damn, illl spare you the details, but damn, damn damn damn. i oh you one

thanks Stoobs

so I see you dumped Alex Smith and picked up Derek Anderson & you are started him against my Raiders on Sunday. LOL you better stick to playing fantasy football with the boys in the barn cuz your really good at that

Sarah, Hey! Here's my public comment on "I love Dick ch. 02.!" This story is hotter than ch. 01! That's what I call fantasy football! After I read it, and blew my top, I dreampt that you and I playing fantasy football! Needless to say, you were an ALL-WORLD Center! Ch. 3, You, Troy & Big Ben! Prove to actual Steelers how much you love Dick! That would be a sexy read! Congradulations on the 2-0 start! Love Ya! Len

ps: Put that porn star in waiting, Steely McBeam in a story, too! Ha!Ha!

sarahhh

you did a wonderful job telling a story, not just a quick screw job. humor, raw sex and a plot, how unusual on this site. kudos, kudos. if you haven't already, you should look into the possibility of writing some mainstream fiction. you might just be the next Joan Collins. love to see more of your work.

Hike it to ME! Your hut slut story is a hot hoot. Benny the Jet from My Space.

Dick, Dick, Dick ... is that ALL you think about !!

you nailed the story like a biker boy ..

If you ask me, it was better than part 1. Fantastic!!! And STEELERS all the damn way

Sarahhhhhhh,I would love to play anytime anywhere with YOU!

Loved your story, also love your stories....You get me hard is that allowed? Hope! Anyway you stay sweet and hot.lol billyd13 billydug

I should know better than to read one of your stories first thing in the morning. I spit . . . out my coffee. But it doesn't appear that you spit in the story. LOL. Funny posts you make on those Steelers threads on MySpace. Go Dick! Go Steelers! Luv the story, Allison D.

Sarahhh, I loved your story, for a short story you are very 'graphic' and don't leave anything out, very detailed and I love that...keep up the great work, you are a fantastic writer of such HOT ASS stories...

Rocketman

the D coached by Dick will rock vs. 49ers again this sunday so we need another I LOVE DICK chapter

excellent story, great second to first one. and, well, if you need someone to kiss...even if your face is covered by copious amounts of spunk, I'm there! You won't make me entertain you by being the new "center," in the barn... to hike the ball....8^)

Sarahhh you sure do get into some strange clit u ations why I bet you are the No 1 banger in all of the USA am not into gang bangs whether they are stealers steelers two wheelers don't go for watching another play with Sarahhh Ohhh but the action was good and the writing always enjoyable

I love (and lust after) your imagination. Where does a girl with your obvious poise and grace get such preverted [sic] ideas? Thanks for this and please hurry up with "Dicks" next adventure.

if you are going to mention the Steelers in every story then please point out that the Ravens kicked there ass twice last year and you will get more of the same this season. how about a story where you get it in the ass by the Ravens mascots Edgar, Allan, and Poe?

Sarah, you just keep getting hotter and hotter and you keep getting me hornier and hornier. Great story. Would love to play fantasy football with you. BTW, I really am a Steeler fan.

Sarah, you just keep getting hotter and hotter and you keep getting me hornier and hornier. Great story. Would love to play fantasy football with you. BTW, I really am a Steeler fan.

have one that says I LUV & than pic of kitty under it & please write story about it

Nobody but a yinzer could write a story this hot!

WHAT HAVE YOU TURNED INTO? A FUCKIN WHORE?? DAMNIT TO HELL SARAH, WHERE HAVE I GONE WRONG? I SHOULD NEVER HAVE TAKEN YOUR CHERRY AND TAUGHT YOU ALL ABOUT SEX, AS THEN YOU MAY STILL HAVE BEEN MY SWEET RED HEADED DAUGHTER. I AM VERY PISSED OFF AT YOU AFTER READING THIS!

WAIT UNTIL YOU GET HOME! I'M GOING TO TAKE AWAY YOUR BEAMER CONVERTIBLE AND WHIP YOUR ASS! IF YOU BRING ONE OF YOUR GIRLFRIENDS HOME, TELL THEM TO EXPECT TO SEE YOU GET A WHIPPING! THAT'S RIGHT, RIGHT IN FRONT OF THEM I'M GOING TO PUT YOUR BARE ASS OVER MY KNEE AND WHIP YOU HARD!! YOU WILL NOT BE ABLE TO SIT DOWN FOR AWHILE AND GO BACK TO COLLEGE WITH A RED ASS! BRING A VIRGIN HOME AND I MAY GO EASIER ON YOU, LETTING YOU WATCH ME TAKE HER CHERRY. EITHER WAY YOU WILL GET A SPANKING. I IMAGINE YOUR MOM IS ROLLING OVER IN HER GRAVE FOR THE WHORE YOU HAVE BECOME. NOW GET YOUR TIGHT, DRIPPING PUSSY HOME NOW!

DAD

sarah hon, this is one of your best ever. Lighter on the humor, strong on the sex. not overdone and done well.

you know, ive re read rattrap twice now and was wondering if you are doing another of its kind?

sarah hon, this is one of your best ever. Lighter on the humor, strong on the sex. not overdone and done well.

you know, ive re read rattrap twice now and was wondering if you are doing another of its kind?

not sure why this has me as anonymous. it's jeff

Daddy (RichardS50), I'm so sorry for whoring around. But I wanted to write a story in the Erotic Whore category. And of course I had to live the experience first. Actually, I couldn't find the Erotic Whore category unless somebody spelt it Erotic Horror by mistake. Daddy, I am pleased to report that I have once again been inspired by that Literotica living legend and by far most popular author, James R. Scouries, to write another true incest story about Daddy. So stay tuned for my Halloween contest story entitled "Where's My Head?" And Daddy, don't forget to tell all your buddies who also bang their daughters to check out Mr. Scouries (author name=scouries) wonderful stories like "Daddy?" I Whispered.

liked this one even better than the 1st chap although I hate the Steelers. nobody can write hotter storys than you babe. Funny shit too

You are gifted Sarahhh. Keep up the good work.

your stories are always enjoyable.....and HARD to put doown!

Sarah, your an angle....A Sex Angle because you give us all what we need to survive= = = Hot Sex.

Good story as always Sarah, but would've been better if you had told us about when it was Thumpers turn at you suckig his huge cock and him pounding his monster meat into your hot slutty pussy !!!

PLEASE keep the hot exciting stories cumming babe, sure is boring when your not writting !!!! Thanks again, gotta gopump this meat now....Thanks to you.

I talked a couple girls in my dorm into playing fantasy football this year. so far it hasnt turned out like your story but I hope to score soon

Sarahh, you are the best.

My wife loves your writing and was really turned on by this gang bang story. She is too shy to do a gang bang in real life but wanted to recreate this story. So I got to fuck her mouth and cum down her throat. Then she road my cock and I filled up her pussy with another load. Finally, and after a little break, I did her ass and put the final load of cum in her bowels. She was sore, dripping from every hole but loved it. Thanks for the story!!!

Mike in Ohio

I Love Dick Again.

I Still Love Dick.

I Love More Dick.

I Love Dick Too.

I Love Dick Also.

Didn't I Just Get Finished Loving Dick?

I'm Going to Love More Dick Later.

Sarah,

Here is my latest try to put a comment here. As usual, you provided much 'inspiration' for me. I think that I'm in love with you.

Uncle Jim

I get a lot of "entertaining" feedback sent to me privately via e-mail in addition to the public comments. This one I received yesterday made me wet my panties***from Anonymous: I am surprised, and very disappointed, that you allow your name and

work to be abused by scouries in his offensive and cancerous attacks on

writers like drksideofthemoon, cloudy, danielle kitten and many others.

How you permit this scumbag to claim you are part of his 'club' amazes

me.

I've ready you, admired you and '5-bombed ' you for ages. If you stay

in this evil anti-lit group with scouries, I will put you on ignore.

I'm ashamed of you, i thought you believed in the ideals of Lit. Go

elsewhere if you sign up with Scouries.***Hey people, make sure you check out the most popular stories on this website, which are written by scouries and have titles like "Daddy," I whispered.

Wow the true winners are us the readers what a exciting, raw and horny story makes me wish I was the one who rescued your purse!! keep up the good work cant wait for the next instalment x x Taffeyduckuk x

Now that's what I call Fantasy Football want to be part of my fantasy football Sarah:)

Steve

Sarahhh you magical as an author. Twists of plot, sexy narrative and rousing descriptions of action. Wear your "Dick" shirt again soon.

You have done it again......great story, I can hardly wait for the next installment !!!

Very kinky twist to this...save the girl and girl repays with some hardcore!!

hot story, way to handle attempts to force...very good lead in and build up to story

Wow, this story is hott, I think I made my cock spit like three times before I finishef the story, good job