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Lemon Pie in the DSMIV

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by KOLKORE09/26/07

Even lemons have their days

Laughing; Lauhing; Lauhing; I think I'd look it up under mood disorders...

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by LeBroz09/26/07

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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.


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by twelveoone09/28/07

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Ok I don't know what to make of it, I would have given it an 100 without blinking, if I saw more whang, tang ~ meringue. The rhyme looks random, not fully developed. But, I can't give it a 75 - 'cause I'm scared.

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