All Comments on 'Jail Bird Dad'

Great job!

*swirlygirl

Has this person ever visited someone inside? There is no way he could fuck his daughter in public like that! Otherwise a nice fantasy but its fantasy only!

That kind of makes me want to sneak in the visiting room at a prison.

Very hot. Please continue the story.

Since you've hinted at it already, why don't you add some anal to the next story? Makes sense if you ask me.

Great story.

Nice job! Looking forward to more chapters. I agree with one of the prior posts that a private room for "conjugal visits" would be better and more realistic. Lots of potential for some great future chapters (ie. maybe more teasing at first with just a hand job then some oral before the big event). Would like to hear a better description of how hot Connie looks and the sexy outfits her Dad is having her try on for him. Hope Connie's Dad sends her some sexy outfits for her to model for him on her webcam and in person (such as heels, mini skirts/tube tops, bikinis, sling swimsuits, etc.). Like how she is reluctant but feels guilty enought to submit to her father. Wonder if the guards and/or her Dad's prison buddys might want to have some fun with her at some point? Also agree with one of the prior posts that she'll have to try some anal in the future. Keep up the good work.

I loved it!! Nice work! I wish I was Connie, very nice!!

Love it,

Krystine

that story was fantastic i wish to see more please! great job keep it up!

I hardly ever get off to the same story twice, but this one was a winner! You are my new favorite writer, and I can't wait to read more!

Having sex in a "main" prison room is just as realistic as a father (inmate) being given permission to take his daughter into a conjugal visitation room! Of course it's fantasy, neither scenario is likely to happen!

I thought that the story was HOT! any continuation?

I NEVER comment on stories but your one was so hot! You had a great build up and gave a wonderful description of him cumming, which was my favourite part. More please?!

This is excellent Erica. Can you please write a 2nd chapter to this story? You are my favourite writer!

I cannot wait for the next chapter. I hope that it is soon and with more fucking.

that was soo hottt. are you going to write a sequel?

I'm so wet from reading this story...I just had to touch my self. I loved everything! The teasing...the webcam...the way she got got violated!...omg!!

Gf and I read ur story and loved it so much that we acted it out as a sexual roleplay we ravished each other - both of us cant wait for the second chapter in the private room - congrats erica we love ur work xx Rudi + Kelly xx

damn i cam before he did! this was great! really realy great! i love the force, i love her dazed reaction at the end. and i love how it all just fell together! it was awsome!!!

Excellent story, please take the time to write another chapter

That was so hot, i was soaking before the end! I loved her reaction, I loved the idea of him doing her against the wall, right THERE! It was great, next enstallment, please?

Such a great story! I love that he just took her and shoved her up against the wall and fucked her right there in front of everyone. Now if I could just find someone to do that to me...

I always enjoy reading your stories. There is something about the way you write a sex scene that makes it even hotter. I truly hope that these are just stories and not from any actual experience with incest. I did notice that you have not written in a few years. Perhaps it does strike a little to close to HOME?

Yr imagination is good.........

please extend this story . . . . .

Loved this story, couldn't stop touching myself and pinched my nipples so hard that I came before she even walked out of there.

Readers, any other recommendations on similar stories ????

Wrong but hot! So fucking hot I am still vibrating. YESSSS! Your timing is right on. Very well done.

very good story, got me hot reading it. where is part 2

Simply too impossible to be good. In my opinion a story just has to have some degree of plausibility, at least to a degree that with some stretching of imagination, the reader can make himself believe that this could happen

Compare this to a fantasy/sci-fi story and why good writers do a lot of research and make the story scientifically, if not possible, at least plausible!

I loved this story ! Will there be another part of this story of just the two of them?

That was great where's part two?

Oh and make it more rough and brutal that'll be a really turn on.

Great raw fuck of his daughter he needs ot do her again in a private fuck session, then more times in the jail where and whenthey can get alone.

please add more of this. it's crazy but in a good and godly great!

Wow....that was hot. Second time I have this story, even hotter this time around.

please write more soon! this is a great read

This story is so hot you should really do more :)

i just love this story,my all time best

It's a good quick read

Love this one! I'd let him fuck me. ;)

for sharing your stories, such hot-blooded thrilling adventures, that exude such brazen sexual allure. Hope you continued writing and upload more.

I love his story. Whenever I get horny, I just read this story.

After her dad uses her for a while, for intimate visits, he should share her with other inmates and guards in exchange for power in the can. They can gangbang her with DPs and her dad will be chilling inside jail.

I want to read more . I didn't want it to end my pussy is so wet!

More more More!!!

I love the way you write and your plots. I would love to experience this some day.

This story has made me cum so many times!

A short story, but the idea of the storyline isn't bad, that's the reason for me to set it by my favorites.

How nasty hot it would be if daddy shared her with some other inmates or guards! xoxo, PrincessDanyel

Daddies sometimes do daughters