All Comments on 'Sergeant Britton Ch. 02'

Keep working at it.

Needs more than proofreading and editing!

Okay, the last story had unrealistic aspects, but this one was just too much. Everyone just going along with it? The girls just submitting without question to two guys showing up at their door? Why was the other chick sitting topless at the computer? Girls don't just sit around topless with each other. Sorry. I couldn't even read it after the sergeants got to the room. (I was eagerly anticipating up to that point.) I started skimming forward to find something worth reading. Didn't find it. Glad it was short. And FYI: confidence is sexy, but fixation on yourself is a turn-off.