and it explained a lot from Chapter 1. Thanks for the great read.
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Anonymous09/21/07
dont stop now
dont stop now because of the few idiots that thought this was rape. i would like t see more of what happens between daughter and daddy and whether he gets her pregnant or not
Please don't let some negative remarks keep you from penning this story. I read the first chapter and didn't see it as rape at all. I don't read many incest stories as it's not really my kinda thing, but I can certainly appreciate a good story and a great author. Which this has both! Please keep going. You have more than a few loyal readers!
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Anonymous09/21/07
Don't let them get you down
I loved the first chapter. I was really hoping for more from this chapter though. It's clear where you let some dumb people get to you and made you pull your punches. This chapter was too vanilla.
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Anonymous09/21/07
DONT YOU DARE
Dont you dare let idiots decide what you do or do not write I commented on the first ch about my parents nieghbors daughter,I am feeling pleasantly tired at the moment and so is she.There a loads of hot arsed young girls who love an older man ,even if it is their dad believe you me.More please as Rachel said much more.YOU CAN USE YOUR IMAGINATION WHO RACHEL IS.JIMBO
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Anonymous09/21/07
Do Not let the Fools get at you
I think you have happy memories of a shed ,I know I do and so does she
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Anonymous09/21/07
Forgot
There was even a ladydird on her bum,and a green eyed spider who eyed me with envy.This is a lovely story and very true to life believe me.
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Anonymous09/21/07
great story... the best i've read yet
loved the story. Keep up the good work. It brought back so many memories. I'd love to be fucked like that
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Anonymous09/22/07
Feminists and morons! Fantastic story!
Continue to write what you want too. Loved chapter 1 and 2 of the shed if you want to do a chapter 3 you should. Well written.
Loved this one as much as the first. Personally, I love a shaved pussy, so that really struck a chord...among other things...
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Anonymous09/22/07
I remember a shed
I remember a shed but it was my Grand fathes shed and it was my cousin and I who experienced the first ture act of sexual experimentation to the highest levels .that was 27 years ago and we still get together for our own fun times .the smile we get when we see old pics of that "old shed"in family photos.KEEP then comming please!!!!!!!!!
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Anonymous09/22/07
Dirty old man
I am a dirty old man ,well not that old.It would be a sin if you listen to those that cannot read properly,and make daft comments.I would love to read a chapter 3,yes like many others I had a lovely time in my dads shed with a young female relative.
I read both parts of this story and find this second installment better than the first. In the first, I saw no reason to believe this apparently inexperienced girl would suddenly becomw her father's lover. Perhaps you could have had her finding the magazines and while looking through them be thinking about her father and how much she wanted him. Then, when he seduced her, he would think he was satisfying his own dark desires but really be satisfying hers.
Write more, and delve more deeply into the characters. Let the sex be a way to give them that elusive third dimension and not just an excuse to have them fuck. Well done!
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Anonymous09/22/07
No mistake!
If anyone thought that it was a rape in episode one, they need to learn how to read!! It is gratifying, however, to see a bunch of people who obviously were able to enjoy your story about seduction of a father. I would love to have a whole series of sequelae.
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Anonymous09/22/07
forget about it
dont worry about the people who didn't like it. they dont have to read it if they don't want to. i loved both installments and hope you keep writing more.
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Anonymous09/22/07
Good Job
You did a good job of writing about father/daughter incest. He nailed her good. Having daddy's cum squirt against his daughter's cervix was a nice touch. If my cock had not already been hard that would have made it hard. Thanks for the good story.
Don't know where the rape came in at but I thought both parts were very well put together to make for a very interesting story with more to come if alot of people would learn to read before they opened mouths! Shame because I thought you might get a 4 or 5 out of this one - oh well ! Will look forward to your next one and hope people have learned a lesson. Thank You... JAG
But then, most incest stories are great.haha Rape? Jeez, some people need to read more, and maybe learn. I did think the first part was leading toward bdsm, but a nice change at the end to make it just sex. The second was good, but would have expected a bit more "horse play" in the empty house. I may just be another dirty old man, but I think "daddy" and "sweetie" should remain the names they call each other, otherwise, it moves away from incest. And, maybe it's all about the law or editors values, but how many children suddenly become sexual at 18? "About to graduate and I became aware of my body." Please! haha
Don't EVER stop writing "because of others"! People who don't like "incest/taboo" should JUST STOP READING "incest/taboo"! I got similar comments on one of my stories because some idiot thought that it should have been sci-fi instead of incest even though it was listed as incest/taboo. Another idiot thought that it was wrong for me to have the father having sex with his daughter even though it was listed in incest/taboo (yes, the same story)! Some of these "children" who are reading these stories apparently think that "incest" is bug sex or something! Just because a few people are too stupid to understand the subject matter, don't give in to their idiocy and don't ever change what you like for their benefit! You are too good of a writer to bow to their stupidity! Write what you like, how you like, about whatever you like!
Yes - loved both episodes - keep writing - people who dont like it shouldnt even be in the "incest/taboo" site - tell them to 'bug off' and keep up the good work
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Anonymous09/29/07
Nqthing Wrong
There was nothing wrong with BOTH Ch 1 or this one,it really irritates me that some see fit to read these stories with the sole intention of making stupid comments.I suppose it gives them some sort of feeling of power in their otherwise lacklustre lives.I do hope you write a third chapter
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Anonymous12/01/07
Great incest
Great story. The father really fucking his daughter well. I thoroughly enjoyed reading about it. You gave excellent detail. That made it more enjoyable. We need more stories of fathers using their dicks on their daughters. I especially enjoyed the way he kept his dick buried in her pussy when he squirted. Keep writing them and we'll keep reading them.
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Anonymous03/25/11
good story
Not bad
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Anonymous08/06/13
mmmmmm daddy
I've always wanted to control my dad. make him want me so bad he'd leave bitch mum. I'm stacy18_bi@hotmail.com. hit me up if you've done that to your dad too. or want to.
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Anonymous02/27/17
Listen...
You are very bad writer. Perhaps no one has been honestly appraising you work.
English
A terrific sequel...
and it explained a lot from Chapter 1. Thanks for the great read.
dont stop now
dont stop now because of the few idiots that thought this was rape. i would like t see more of what happens between daughter and daddy and whether he gets her pregnant or not
Wonderful
I personally loved your first chapter of this better than this one, but I liked this just the same.
Don't listen to what people say. Pleanty of people on here write and read the more forced sex stories (Including me) and love them.
Keep writing!
Please...
Please don't let some negative remarks keep you from penning this story. I read the first chapter and didn't see it as rape at all. I don't read many incest stories as it's not really my kinda thing, but I can certainly appreciate a good story and a great author. Which this has both! Please keep going. You have more than a few loyal readers!
Don't let them get you down
I loved the first chapter. I was really hoping for more from this chapter though. It's clear where you let some dumb people get to you and made you pull your punches. This chapter was too vanilla.
DONT YOU DARE
Dont you dare let idiots decide what you do or do not write I commented on the first ch about my parents nieghbors daughter,I am feeling pleasantly tired at the moment and so is she.There a loads of hot arsed young girls who love an older man ,even if it is their dad believe you me.More please as Rachel said much more.YOU CAN USE YOUR IMAGINATION WHO RACHEL IS.JIMBO
Do Not let the Fools get at you
I think you have happy memories of a shed ,I know I do and so does she
Forgot
There was even a ladydird on her bum,and a green eyed spider who eyed me with envy.This is a lovely story and very true to life believe me.
great story... the best i've read yet
loved the story. Keep up the good work. It brought back so many memories. I'd love to be fucked like that
Feminists and morons! Fantastic story!
Continue to write what you want too. Loved chapter 1 and 2 of the shed if you want to do a chapter 3 you should. Well written.
A wonderful addition to an already great story.
Loved this one as much as the first. Personally, I love a shaved pussy, so that really struck a chord...among other things...
I remember a shed
I remember a shed but it was my Grand fathes shed and it was my cousin and I who experienced the first ture act of sexual experimentation to the highest levels .that was 27 years ago and we still get together for our own fun times .the smile we get when we see old pics of that "old shed"in family photos.KEEP then comming please!!!!!!!!!
Dirty old man
I am a dirty old man ,well not that old.It would be a sin if you listen to those that cannot read properly,and make daft comments.I would love to read a chapter 3,yes like many others I had a lovely time in my dads shed with a young female relative.
another dirty old man
I read both parts of this story and find this second installment better than the first. In the first, I saw no reason to believe this apparently inexperienced girl would suddenly becomw her father's lover. Perhaps you could have had her finding the magazines and while looking through them be thinking about her father and how much she wanted him. Then, when he seduced her, he would think he was satisfying his own dark desires but really be satisfying hers.
Write more, and delve more deeply into the characters. Let the sex be a way to give them that elusive third dimension and not just an excuse to have them fuck. Well done!
No mistake!
If anyone thought that it was a rape in episode one, they need to learn how to read!! It is gratifying, however, to see a bunch of people who obviously were able to enjoy your story about seduction of a father. I would love to have a whole series of sequelae.
forget about it
dont worry about the people who didn't like it. they dont have to read it if they don't want to. i loved both installments and hope you keep writing more.
Good Job
You did a good job of writing about father/daughter incest. He nailed her good. Having daddy's cum squirt against his daughter's cervix was a nice touch. If my cock had not already been hard that would have made it hard. Thanks for the good story.
really enjoyed both parts
Don't know where the rape came in at but I thought both parts were very well put together to make for a very interesting story with more to come if alot of people would learn to read before they opened mouths! Shame because I thought you might get a 4 or 5 out of this one - oh well ! Will look forward to your next one and hope people have learned a lesson. Thank You... JAG
A Great Story
But then, most incest stories are great.haha Rape? Jeez, some people need to read more, and maybe learn. I did think the first part was leading toward bdsm, but a nice change at the end to make it just sex. The second was good, but would have expected a bit more "horse play" in the empty house. I may just be another dirty old man, but I think "daddy" and "sweetie" should remain the names they call each other, otherwise, it moves away from incest. And, maybe it's all about the law or editors values, but how many children suddenly become sexual at 18? "About to graduate and I became aware of my body." Please! haha
I loved both stories - DON'T STOP WRITING!
Don't EVER stop writing "because of others"! People who don't like "incest/taboo" should JUST STOP READING "incest/taboo"! I got similar comments on one of my stories because some idiot thought that it should have been sci-fi instead of incest even though it was listed as incest/taboo. Another idiot thought that it was wrong for me to have the father having sex with his daughter even though it was listed in incest/taboo (yes, the same story)! Some of these "children" who are reading these stories apparently think that "incest" is bug sex or something! Just because a few people are too stupid to understand the subject matter, don't give in to their idiocy and don't ever change what you like for their benefit! You are too good of a writer to bow to their stupidity! Write what you like, how you like, about whatever you like!
lux it
i loved this whole story.
yes
Yes - loved both episodes - keep writing - people who dont like it shouldnt even be in the "incest/taboo" site - tell them to 'bug off' and keep up the good work
Nqthing Wrong
There was nothing wrong with BOTH Ch 1 or this one,it really irritates me that some see fit to read these stories with the sole intention of making stupid comments.I suppose it gives them some sort of feeling of power in their otherwise lacklustre lives.I do hope you write a third chapter
Great incest
Great story. The father really fucking his daughter well. I thoroughly enjoyed reading about it. You gave excellent detail. That made it more enjoyable. We need more stories of fathers using their dicks on their daughters. I especially enjoyed the way he kept his dick buried in her pussy when he squirted. Keep writing them and we'll keep reading them.
good story
Not bad
mmmmmm daddy
I've always wanted to control my dad. make him want me so bad he'd leave bitch mum. I'm stacy18_bi@hotmail.com. hit me up if you've done that to your dad too. or want to.
Listen...
You are very bad writer. Perhaps no one has been honestly appraising you work.
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