All Comments on 'Boy Did I Fuck Up'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wrong category.

This story is more appropriate for non-consent/reluctance than loving wives. The idea of dominant Georgia, twisting and hurting hubby's penis to make his erection fail, controlling him (and him not being able to resist her) while her husband Slate practically rapes Samantha is really a reluctance theme permeating the story. Another category that would fit better might be interracial since this is also emphasized in the story. Loving wives just does not seem appropriate. I give this 25% because the writing was mediocre, the sex was not erotic, and the plot was, like the porn video in the story, amateurish.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice twist, rotten plot. A man is tortured by his

friends and convinced to let his wife be used by another man. She is to dumb and stupid to say no and explain it to her husband. Personally, I would have shot my friend for having the video of her, which would have indicated he had something to do with it. Then I would have thrown my wife out of the house on her ass along with his wife. She could spend the rest of her life explaining how it wasnt her. She knew the movie existed and let him be used this way so she was part of the plan. With friends and relations like this he is better off in prison, so on second thought, clean the gene pool and off all three of them. Claim temporary insanity and be out in a few years.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nope

Nope, sorry just did not like this story.

Harryin VAHarryin VAover 16 years ago
please PLEASE stop writing

we are begging you... yout stories suck

Please stop writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
very poor writing

very poor writing. It has to make SOME sense.

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
Why?

It hurt my head to read this. Why?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Bullshit

Write as much as you want, just don't post your piss-poor crap on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
How can you judge?

How can anyone judge a story when it is so poorly written that it makes no sense?<p>

There are many people who either did not think it was important to study English grammer in school, or who subscribed to the current erroneous notion that it is only important to get the idea across rather than worry about grammatical precision. These same people then wonder why readers cannot "get" their ideas because it is hard to determine just what it is they are trying to say.<p>

But then, education is not about teaching and learning...it is about political correctness and ideological propaganda.<p>

Anyhow...please do not try to write any more stories. There are other nobel interests that you could follow.<p>

Have a good day!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Horrible Writing

This would have to be a thousand percent better than it is to deserve a constructive comment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
HOw the hell would she know who made the tape??

What kind of "man" would fuck his best friends wife? What kind of "man" lets another man fuck his wife? What kind of woman just lets another man feel her up and fuck her and then say "I couldn't help myself." Pardon me??? Try using that arguement in court..."Sorry I raped my best friends wife, I couldn't help myself." Finish third grade Elia....then try to write a coherent story.

Ducky7Ducky7over 16 years ago
Don't know who fucked up him or her

Bad read, bad play on relationships and bad interaction. Can't say much more, this is the first of your stories I have read, I will read one more but if it's this bad, well??

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Yes he's a fool...again..

The story was well written and flowed smothly. Reality check was weak. Made me start to say bullshit before it was close to being over. Nice twist at the end but boy is he screwed. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Even Your Titles Are Repetitious Cuck

Universally by comment score - your wimpiness aggravates any semi-normal person.<P>

Given the time you spend on these wimpy male humiliation story's and all you get are all negative comments [ except for the poor excuses for a man like yourself ] one wonders why you bother.<P>

Go waste your talent elsewhere little sick one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Think First

If you know you aren't going to like it don't waste time reading it. If you read and it don't like it don't wear your fingers out telling us. If you must tell us then learn English first.

peggytwittypeggytwittyover 16 years ago
Just a poor fantasy story

I don't normally comment on what I see as these weird fantasy stories. They must be written by people who have never really been in love with anyone. They have just been fascinated as with a friend with benefits they live with.<P>There are of course those who actually live being a submissive as they have no self-esteem. They have a partner who must dominate them as they cannot have respect for a person who has no respect for themselves. Any person who has no love for themselves, has nothing worthwhile to give to anyone.<P>True love has you feeling the others pain and joy as the two share themselves with all they are only with each other. Any diatribe of being so loving as to give the other anything they desire really just points out the one being given the gift of adultery really could give a shit about the one giving this surrender of their close feelings.<P>If you both decide to try swapping that is an acknowledgement of the fact both desire others in their relationship and they have turned a corner of great friends with benefits. Many couples do see a controlled swapping as a way to keep their marriage, as without it they would naturally split up. They need more then their partner alone can provide. Curiosity killed the cat and many marriages.<P><P>The sorry thing is that most that comment on self-cuckolding are anonymous and call others names who disagree with them. If they see this willing cuckolding mainstream, then why not put their comments out with a way of being reached. Most who comment with a name seem to be more civil and not combative with mindless name calling.<P> You appear to write well but your small part of Loving Wives, the self-cuckolding, is not to my tastes as there is no consequences just submissiveness, a mental disease.<P>PT

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Thanks

Hot story, thanks. Please write more...

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Cuckster Doesn't even Respect Self

Talented but so sick - a waste of a non-UKer's time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
why why why

Only a Retard would read a story on here, then babble some psychology garbage about relationships,or complain because they know where a friggin comma should go,while half of their critisism proves they cannot put two and two together.Does anyone really deserve to be corrected by someone with their finger jammed in their anus on a computer. YOURMOMSBOX

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Sick !

Another sick story by a sick author about sick characters, no wonder people have no respect for americans.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
sick minded people do anything

kick her ass and the scumbag friend ass out of his house.why men so sissyboys weak.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Right there with a 12 year old...

Immature, silly, nothing erotic, no reasonable behavoir.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very good story

Very good story. Would like the ending to show that the duped couple is forgiving of the treachery of the other couple because of the joint fun ending.

Write more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
fool me once..

shame on me, fool me twice, shame on me. he needs to reconsider those close to him, and get away from them

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Where can I find one for my wife?

I have a beautiful white wife and a great sex life but I often fantasize about watching her get fucked by a large black man and then filming the creampie. I am leaking so much precum after reading your hot story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
another!

You should add another story with another meeting between the two couples :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Waste

Another to avoid reading. The whole enjoyment of your wife cheating is for losers in the long run.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
And she couldn't tell him?

What a crock. She WANTED to get fucked and she did. Set the whole thing up. Time for another slut to get the divorce she earned.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

This author says he has no fetishes! LMFAO!!! Just because you sick fucking cucks want this behavior to be normal doesn't mean it will ever be! Do you honestly believe cuckoldry is not a fetish?

Tootight1Tootight1almost 8 years ago
good story

the circumstances that were set up was worth the read. I think that they need to re-define the definition of friend. if it was my wife, no matter what the truth really is, there would be some bodies laying on the floor, and a full trunk to the lake. No matter who was telling the truth or lies, she willingly went along with his (friend). It's not a question if he wanted her to do it or not, she elected to do it. Doesn't matter if he is black, white, or yellow or red, they would all be history.

I'm not a prude by any means, and may have gone along with it, under the right circumstances. Number one being that she at least expressed a desire for it, or I did. Then it would have been a lot of talk before the deed. What in the hell do these people have in their definition of friend?

My immediate response to this story, was a bit emotional, but truthful. Obviously, as much as I would love to have the guy castrated in front of his wife, it's not the right thing to do by civilized people. Divorce is obvious, but not required, depending on the conversation with the wife. If hubby is no longer up to snuff to please his wife then, divorce is the only road to follow. At that time, castration would certainly be warranted, in front of the both wives. It's the only option left, otherwise, they would ruin someone else's marriage, please take note of the key word ruin. Some people are known for that, and the only answer, or remedy is castration.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Two Married Guys Watching Porn and Jacking Off in Front of Each Other?

That's just gay! Understandable if they were twelve years old at summer camp or in the school gym locker room. But this is just gay male.

One star!

And when is he going to get revenge on Slate and his wife?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
This story sucked

I know it's a cuckold story by a cuckold author and I don't have a problem with that. The story however is complete garbage. He couldn't tell it wasn't his wife? Apparently it was just her face that was photoshopped.

What's with the last sentence? His wife said it was Georgia that was in the video, then the last sentence it says "No, it wasn't Georgia in the movie."

Why did Georgia twist the dudes dick? That earns yourself a smack in the face and he was just cool with it? Does Sam have autism? That whole time she can't say it wasn't her in the movie?

Trying to jack off to the story, but it was so bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
All white husbands must be stupid wimps

Wow more grounding breaking material. White husband is stupid and wimpy. White wife gets the sex of her life from black stud. He’s ok with it, just plain stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
NOBODY is that stupid.

She meant to do exactly what she did. And she got what she wanted - a divorce. Because whether or not it was her in the movie, it sure as hell was her in the room. So either way she's a cheating slut and their marriage is over. Dumb story. Unfinished to boot.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Rotten

This was putrid in 2007 and she has only made it stink more.

e10creampiee10creampieover 3 years ago
Couple Cuck

I absolutely love stories where a wife helps her husband cuckold a couple. I wish there were more great ones like this to read. There's just something about a wife who is domme enough to help and enjoy it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
pathetic really

His buddy conned him into getting to fuck his wife and he thinks its his fault - thick as

26thNC26thNCabout 2 years ago

No bitch, you fucked way down with Jamal.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is Theater of the Absurd reduced to a sophomoric, racist depravity. It would make just as much sense for the MC to suddenly begin eating and drinking only from the toilet while using landscaping shears to cut off one of his fingers every 6 hours in order to shove the detached digit up his ass. There's nothing erotic or entertaining about malodorous filth such as this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Another boring story where a guy naturally has a big dock”black” friend fuck his wife. Many of these stories are big on pointing out that the wife is a slut…which she is… however the lack of respect shown but both parties make these types of stories repetitive, dull and boring to read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Worst pos I’ve run across on this site. Seems like the author went

out of his way to make this intentionally awful.

ALERT. Steer clear of this guy.

DazzyDDazzyD7 months ago

Time for a word of prayer!'

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