by firstkiss
we have waited allll this time and you gave us toooooo short one . But it was a good one . Hot intense and romantic a little bit . Pls post more sooon . I dont like to read 1 page stories
A "famous" author on Literotica once said to me "Leave them wanting more."
Great chapter, worth the wait! :)
Though the chapter was short as previously mentioned, the content of the chapter more than made up for it. I read this at work and thankfully no one came in my office while reading it! I was totally caught up in the chapter, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!!
just wanted to say I love this story. Can't wait to read what happens next.
I thought it was fabulous. The way you built up the tension between Daniel and Clara was just perfect. The kiss, when it happened, was something I as a reader could almost feel! Yes, it was one page long and of course I wanted more, but it felt as though you'd poured your heart and soul into that one page. You put many published authors to shame. Hope you get some time to write more soon :)
Now that's what I'm talking about! I knew I was waiting for something good and I it got even better. So glad you're back.
Having been in architectural practice for many years and being married to a romance writer (who died several years ago), I have totally enjoyed your tale. Action--reaction--that's what it is all about. I did not spend 20 years working for someone, it was more like two.
The emotion and fireworks emanating from this chapter were intense and worth every day of excruiciating agaony as I waited for it to be written.
Well done. Gimme more!! Also waiting for more of Not My Type...you left a little bit of a cliffhanger there ya know.
I was seriously worried Daniel was going to put up his walls again and not let them back down. Yeah Clara! Go get your man! Awesome, well worth the wait.
This was a wonderful chapter, and I was so excited to see it up!!! You did an awesome job firstkiss and I can't wait to read more. I just hope you make it longer, I need more!!!!
Where to start? You write very well, lots of description, emoition and energy. Does your writing flow or is it painfully crafted and reworked? All this to say, it is refreshing to read so well a crafted work.
Is this it for this storey?
So happy to read updates from you! Hope all gets straightened out in your real life so you can update again soon. You're my favourite!
ohh sooo good iwaited forever for this and now i want even more what a delicous story can't wait to read more :)
I can't believe I overlooked when this came out! I know begging you probably won't get you to write the next (final?) chapter any faster...but I don't care. Please, please, please write something, anything for us. I think I can speak for almost all your readers when I say we need another chapter, and soon!
YUH THING SELL OFFFFF!!!!!!!!! IT BAD! IT BAD
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
UR ONE IN A MILLION:)
OMG Firstkiss!!!
This is fantastic!!!!! Wow! What drama!!
This is the most dramatic thing I have read in years.
This is so good I am proud to have chosen to read your work.
Don't know what else to say. It was that good.
Thank you for writing it, and for all the hard work, and blood, sweat and tears, that gave you the background to be able write it.
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Love the passion you create! Can feel the pull between these two because you so clearly and competently write it.
...will ALWAYS come out in the end. I'm sick of the bastard "users" that always strive for the "high" ground by selfishly manipulating others to reach their worthless self-centered goals. Daniel AND Clara, obviously have a strong sense of what is right and wrong. It's all about ETHICS, PROFESSIONALISM, and shall I say it...A very real, evolving, and genuine LOVE for one another. Nothing else will matter in the end, but their all encompassing affection and concern for a life MEANT to be lived together...Nice...
I imagined a sea of dumb founded faces with like crickets in the back ground :)
Knowing my crazy ass, I would have been the one to go...WHOOOO!
I love her personality! She is strong! I hope everything works out for them!
High fives all round (and that includes you firstkiss!)