I enjoyed this story quite a bit but I think I would have enjoyed it more if I hadn't had to edit a lot of it in my own head. Try spell check and re reading your stories before you post them. So many mistakes in that one. It distracts from the excitement of the story if one has to stop and consider the correct wording that was meant in that section over and over.
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I enjoyed this story quite a bit but I think I would have enjoyed it more if I hadn't had to edit a lot of it in my own head. Try spell check and re reading your stories before you post them. So many mistakes in that one. It distracts from the excitement of the story if one has to stop and consider the correct wording that was meant in that section over and over.
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