Hunted: Predator Versus Prey

Luv your writing

So glad you're back! You're amazingly talented and your stories are always scorching hot. This one was pretty rough and not for the faint of heart. I like them to be a little 'nicer' but that's just me. Hope to read more from you soon.

What happens next

Very hot. I can only wait to see what hte rest of them do to her. The physical violence is a little much but I do love all the other parts. Lets hope the rest is just as good.

awesome as usual

I am so glad you are back! you did not disappoint. This story is just as hot and exciting as the previous ones. The sparks between Sasha & Suzanne are amazing. You are so talented and I hope you continue to write for us and the world. Have you thought about having any of these published? good luck and hope to read more soon.

great

Looking forward to more...SOON. Perfect.

Excellent writing.

Among all the writers on Literotica, you're clearly in the top echelon for atmosphere, suspense, sensuality - all the things that make a truly outstanding erotic work. You really know that lust isn't the only sex-fuelled emotion. Great writing.

What next?

I love this story, I would love to know what happens to her next ;-)

WOW!

I cannot wait to read more!
Suzanne and Sasha make for a wonderful story
Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us!

Hmm

It was kind of a repeat in terms of the actions during sex.. The one difference was the betrayal in the end, which I didn't really enjoy, not exactly taking control.. anywho, I still enjoy your stories ..written extremely well .. Bit disappointed in terms of new sell is all.. *rambles*

Hey woman

Glad to see you're back. There is a severe shortage on this site of authors who can write brutal nonconsent that still manages to be erotic. Now if you'll just write some nonconsent incest...

Thank you so much for writing again. It was really incredible!

Wonderful yet again!

Shasha remains to be one of the best character written on literotica. You should be proud that it isn't just random fucking, but you have more emotions than just lust in your writing, the mix of violence and erotic desire makes the perfect amount of brutality for a non-con story. Please keep writing because I love your stories and wish to hear more about Shasha and Anne.

Very talented and very erotic. Wonderful job.

MistressDarkness

Thank you!

I was delighted to see more about Sasha (& Suzanne); I love your writing style and look forward to reading more of your work.

Wish it were longer...

Great story! Was surprised by the ending...wished you would have continued. LOVED IT! Please write again soon.

Woah

that Was Awesome, I love all of you're Stories, this one left the same weird warm feeling in my stomach, lol, :P, but really now, I love it, I wish you'd write more, I'm a picky reader but you got me hooked.

This is going to sound dumb.

you are the best writer on this site when it comes to this type of story, it is always erotic and always satasfies me. I'd love to see a story about S and S running away from the organization she works for, or something to do with them falling in love again.

AHHHHHHHHHH!

you are so totally awesome! you are being added to my faves and being worshipped as I type this!

Now i have to go to 'bed' XD

Oh my goodness.

Your series of Hunted is my absolute favorite story I've ever found on.. wow, any website. Sooo addicted. Please write more! D;

Please keep writing!

I've been reading Literotica for years and happened upon your Hunter stories by chance today, and though I never rated or commented on a story before today, I just had to now. I absolutely love your work. It manages to flesh out characters one can actually be interested in (their motives, what happens to them, etc.), an interesting set of circumstances to hold the reader, and some of the best-written sexual descriptions and dialogue out there. Hands down, this is the best erotica I've ever read. But I was so disappointed to see so few stories! Please, please, I beg you, keep writing!

good sex

Good, hard-ass rape as usual. But I wonder if "bert" is capable of writing something a little softer---no violence, maybe a little romance, more real life?!

Wonderful

Your Hunted story was so amazing that I had to read the rest of the Hunted stories. The first Hunted was the best. I could feel myself shivering as I read the words. Amazing by far. Keep on going. I would much enjoy reading more of your stories. Hunted: AU strip searched didnt have much of an ending but still....amazing.

Wow

That was amazing. I got the chills reading it. Loved it! Keep up the good work.

Loved the first one more

This one was sexy but not romantic. It was still great but have to admit your first one got me hooked.

Wow

Please please please continue this story!
Thoroughly enjoyed it. Love her fighting spirit and inevitable downfall. Love his skills, wish I could meet him!!

Good but...

The 3 alternative realities in your Hunted series work very well in isolation. Sasha and Suzanne are thoroughly enjoyable characters, they're such a perfect yet non-traditional match, and I'd love to read more stories involving them. However, some cut-and-pasted phrases and descriptions make this 3rd iteration a bit boring. If you can write more S&S stories without repeating your own previous work, that will give the characters more dimensions and depth. I for one would love to see Sasha and Suzanne develop further as adult individuals as well as a powerful team.

Do You wanna write something less violent?

I know I'm a first time reader and fill free to cast out my opinion but it kinda turned me off the way the woman in your story is treated and kind of makes me wonder are all of you stories this I don't wanna call it disturbing but...WOW... I guess people really go for brutally beating a woman till a few its from her being unconscious to get her to submit to what he wants her to do. Don't get me wrong i think you're and excellent writer but is that a fantasy that you cant get stuck out of you head who could write so tentatively about those kind of this... it's not that i have a problem with how you write but this novel here i could barely follow along because when i read i vividly picture what going on i couldn't even in my imagination take what i was reading i got offended and mad during and the ending was a bite in the ass...Again i say it was total and utter genius how you put things in perspective but couldn't there at least the woman was in power and not being beaten to a bloody pulp cause i bet if you were standing there in front row view you would no wanna bare witness to that kind of rape going on, again im not aginst rape stories im just less into the ones where the women are beaten within inches of their life just for the humiliation purposes. i think you are very creative and very imaginative but could you write something more romantic and less vulgar please?!!!!!!!!!........Thank you

oooo sasha

See now I just love this pairing and then he goes and throw her to the dogs! Lol still loved it, but I prefer the endings where the twisted relationship becomes more than just sex. Great work though!!!!

LOVED IT

WOW...that was an amazing story

oh sasha!!

Sasha can fuck me hard anytime he wants.

I came so hard fantasizing sasha fucking me...
I picture him torturing me and teasing me with his tongue... Oh fuck me hard sasha!

Lol im getting horny... Again ;)
Keep up the stories

i didnt like this one

i didnt like this story furrybert :( you should not have had him leave her to the other men in the end..

disappointed with the end but im thinkinh of morphing my husband into sasha god what a guy mre more please fbert

MORE MORE MORE

PLEASE CAN WE HAVE MORE HUNTED STORIES

I don't think he should have left her either T^T

Ashamed

I'm ashamed of myself that this story got me incredibly wet and i asked my bf to do it to me as hard as he could.

Best Author by FAR!!

I came upon your stories by chance and they are the best I've ever read. Love Sasha & Suzanne and I love the romance element.....tell me he goes back for her???

PS you should definitely be published.

Thank you

Thank you for having Sasha leave her...I've been following your stories, and this ending is exactly what I've been looking for.
So sadistic.

Oh so very deliciously Nasty Furrybert!

Very very nasty throwing her to the grunts Furrybert - Bravo!

And then?

Have to admit, I want the Grunts story.

Pleasseeee

Please please please write the grunts story. That would be so sexy. You're such an amazing author!!!

the end should have bn dffrent

plz dnt let the feelings she felt for him atlst for few secnds ruin .....its so bad that he left her in that position...how could he !!!!!!!!

Yum!

I'm glad he left her to the grunts, although I would absolutely love to read what happens to her next. Sasha got her to submit to him, and only to him. I know her struggles would continue through the next few men, none of them would be as able to make her cave like Sasha. Although I can see her eventually relaxing into it again, by simple fact of having already had three orgasms...

no

hated this one. seriously disappointing...

To previous commenter

Sorry you didn't like it, but your feedback would be more helpful if you said what it was that you didn't like. Or perhaps made suggestions for improvements.

Please write more!!!!

Your stories are amazing. They are my favorite on this entire site. but i was also upset with the ending. i was hoping that he would keep her all to himself. it was realy sad that he just left her. but i sstill loved the story and you are an amazing writer. please write more

furrybert, it was the leaving her to the grunts...

The first installment of Hunted I enjoyed, even though the whole rape theme is often distasteful to me, I realize it's a fantasy and was able to get caught up into the entire story, beginning to end. While I enjoy a good romance and good erotica, I do have a hard time with a full D/s that is not consensual. Of course, that's not your problem; that's mine. Their relationship in the first Hunted story is sort of consensual in that she chooses her career path and the consequences of it. It evolves, and something shifts in their relationship to where it goes to an equal footing. In this third version, which I am aware is independent of the first and second, it bothered me to see him just abandon her so heartlessly. Again, that's my problem, not yours. This third version ending though, it just ruined the fantasy for me.

Please continue

Your writing is truly amazing. please write more stories!

OMG

Oh my god, you are a truly amazing writer, please continue to write more stories, I really enjoy everything about all of your stories and I really like how the rape theme is also turned into a fantasy theme. I love how you have created these symbolic charaters and I even like the end of this story, don't listen to anyone that tells you this is bad or dissapointing, it is a very descriptive and wonderfully writen piece and I can't wait to read more !

I liked the the first hunted series alot. And I kinda liked this one until the end when you left her to the other soldiers. Because he had feelings for her and then to leave her like that nah it didn't work. Its bad enough he did it to her on a dirty floor infront of them.I thought that was a bit over the top and ruined it for me.

what's next

You can't just leave us hanging... what did the rest of the soldiers do to her? Did Sahsa come back for her later? More please

I just wished you would continue on with the original Hunted, but it doesn't look like you will :*(

agree with everyone

I liked the original two first stories not this one , I hate the direction you took it into :(

Agreeing with some of the previous comments.

Some of the descriptions were repetitive. Nevertheless, still very visceral and effective. (Those who are upset at its brutality should perhaps look to a different category than Non-Consensual.)