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Excellent
Awesome story so far and I can't wait for the rest!
Excellent
Oh Kid, you have a long ride ahead of you!
love it
ooh boy! wow! love it! Cant wait for the next chapter! thanks!
Great characters!
The story is moving along nicely and the characters are well developed. Rafe is definitely a sexy male...love his overpowering and conrolling demeanor. Im looking forward to learning more about Kate and Rafe especially when they come together. I know it will be scorching hot and erotic!!
Hot Dog!
Woman, if you ever decide to submit stuff for publishing, and they do, let me know. Cuz I would pay money to help you be on a bestselling authors list. You've got all the style I wish I had, how you come to a point and tell a story so quickly and smoothly without getting lost in details but having enough details to keep it real, its breathtaking. Even if you re-wrote the phonebook, I'd still have to respect you for your style, and that's nothing on content. Are you an editor? I'm working slowly on a story, if you are, I'd value your opinion over any strangers.
warming up now!
looking forward to read more
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