E.D. you are on the right track. I'm loving this, but feeling strung out already, not enough at once. May we have more please?
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Anonymous10/02/07
Please slow down - I'm lost
Interesting, but baffling. This gave some backstory, but not enough to make sense. I gather it's some kind of paranormal, but I'm not sure what's happening.
English
Wow, the plot thickens
It was Ian's own brother who did this to Isabelle? It gets stranger and stranger, and I am hopelessly caught up in the story.
Feeding
I'm gonna need a daily fix. Very suspenseful. You feed us so little but just enough to keep our appetite for more. If you're like this in bed...
what in hades
you explain little. if there were preceding chapters i apologize for not reading them.
maybe subsequent ones will explain a bit and be a bit less lacking in humanity
H
Not to drive off a potential reader, but.......
HELLO!!! It does say chapter 2!!!! HELLO!!!
Bring it on!!!
E.D. you are on the right track. I'm loving this, but feeling strung out already, not enough at once. May we have more please?
Please slow down - I'm lost
Interesting, but baffling. This gave some backstory, but not enough to make sense. I gather it's some kind of paranormal, but I'm not sure what's happening.
Good beginning
I have enjoyed the first 2 chapters of your stoyr. Your slow into makes me feel like I'm reading a novel as opposed to a short story.
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