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Kay is Forced

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by Anonymous09/28/07

Interesting

I thought you captured the reality of living out a fantasy pretty well. I sense a feeling of disappointment, mixed with some inner turmoil over wanting to be taken roughly. Along with the protagonist, the readers are left wondering and a bit confused as well.

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by Anonymous06/17/10

HOW CONFUSING CAN IT BE ?!?

It started out well, but it changed. And I wouldn't say it was for the good. I wouldn't say giving up is an option, though. Rather, you should try again. If you decided to change direction in a story, give a few more details so that the reader is not mixed up.

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by Anonymous12/08/15

Sorry but this is a waste of time

Sorry but you can not even call this a story, it is only 755 words including the Authors name and title.

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