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Great Quick fantasy!
I enjoyed this! Nicely written, vivid and exciting! Great job!
wonderfully short...
descriptive and to the point... but covering everything... the wants the needs, the desires
well done
so hot!
One of my greatest fantasies as a young man. I wish it had happened to me.
Couldn't do this again?????
Hey, you are just starting on this erotic tale. Whatta ya mean?
Cougar love!
Excellent beginning to a cougar story. I enjoyed it, even though it lacked some dialogue.
I am especially fond of this line: "I rode him then, up and down, up and down, like a pony on a carousel. The music whined, the world spun, and all was cotton candy and glossy red apples forever."
Quite descriptive and perfect. You're a gifted writer.
A lovely trist
I love the descriptions, love them. You can really feel the energy between the characters. I do wish it was longer, not because it was too short, but because I loved reading it so much.
I'll definately be adding this as a favorite and looking at your other stories if you have any.
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