All Comments on 'Accidental First Time Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
SUPERB

KEEP WRITING PLEASE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Don't give up!

Keep working on this, it is done very well. Not too "trashy" and very believable as I read it. Brings back some fond memories w/o the broken arms part. Don't be discouraged you are doing well.

virgin2267virgin2267over 16 years ago
Nice story

I like this story very much, by all means please continue.

Thanks.

TheAdversaryTheAdversaryover 16 years ago
AWESOME

Both stories have been incredible, please keep writing!! Keep it up, seriously amazing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
great writing

i loved this story. simple, believeable, and fantastic. keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
LOVE IT

Don't give up.

The real world feel of a story does it for me every time.

If there is one thing I cant stand it is an unrealistic story.

taxpapabobtaxpapabobover 14 years ago
Sweet First Love

The sex in this tale is delicious, gently passionate, each lover generous to the other -- in short, great stuff! There are too many egregious grammatical mistakes. (Don't write "your" when you mean "you're!") But still the superb tone of the writing and the warm passion force me to give a top 5 Rating. Love it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
gooddstory

I think your story is great. I makes me want a visual. If I didn't like I wouldn't keep reading. Which is always an option for critics.

auhunter04auhunter04about 11 years ago
2 things

1 if you want perfect words punctuation and moralistic views, what the hell are you doing on this site, and where are your stories

2 if you are going to cast stones have the guts to sign the comment. Comments from a-naughty-mouse are to be ignored---so "bite it"

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
beautiful

Beautiful innocence. Keep writing you have a gift.

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