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by Anonymous

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by lustybard09/29/07

Mmm ... you have a deliciously unique writing style, nice to see someone with a bit of craft to their work around here!

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by 09/29/07

Loved the cadence...

...of your writing, particularly in the opening. A few of the similes got a litle strained toward the end, but overall a very nice job.

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