All Comments on 'Just Another Squeeze'

by avasogently

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lustybardlustybardover 16 years ago

Mmm ... you have a deliciously unique writing style, nice to see someone with a bit of craft to their work around here!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Loved the cadence...

...of your writing, particularly in the opening. A few of the similes got a litle strained toward the end, but overall a very nice job.

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