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Yay!
I'm so glad you submitted this. It totally rocks! ~ Imp
Whoopie!
Nice bit of silliness, just the kind of thing I like! Loved it.
Limericks coming on you Lit!
If not here - than where on earth could this ever air!
poetry forum
i mentioned this submission in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. please feel free to come along and join in with other poets. the 50% temp rating is so that it does not affect temp rates that follow - wildsweetone
Haha!
That made me laugh and took my mind off my sore throat - thanks!! :)
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Like Imp said, this totally rocks.
Very Droll
I will add this to my vast collection of limericks if you dont mind.
Teehee!
This gave me a good giggle! Thanks!
Dirty Boy
What is a MILF? Heard it before... I'm so behind the times.
Anyway, superbly written, to the point, easy for us 'newbies' to understand.
Good job!
Great! Just Great!
Hey, I love your poem. I saw you favorited one of my stories so thought I would look at yours. I see you have high approval so I can come back. I had time right now to read this and loved it. If your other work is as good, I'll comment there too! Regards, -C
BETTER THAN SOME STORIES
It is great fun
To hit and run
Your writers muscles to flex
A story filled with violence and sex
Your readers to stun
LOL....Thats why I'm a reader not a writer!
Thanks for letting us into a corner of your life.
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