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1422 Clemency Drive

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by Anonymous

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by RTGoss07/23/08

Very Intense

Very intensely detailed to the extent you can easily "see" every detail and feel the emotions.

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by Anonymous11/23/10

Wow

very well done, noticed a very small number of typo's but such a small amount that it doesn't matter. A great story overall

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by Anonymous03/21/14

Refreshing . . in a funny way!

I really didn't care about the "sex" that much, but I'm glad I kept reading because the ending was not only good, but also more realistic.

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