by MungoParkIII
His neighbour is playing with herself and virtually daring him to whip out his cock and join in, her husband's away for two days, his own wife isn't interested... What the hell <i>does</i> he expect to happen next?
What a hot fantasy! Real people, not so young anymore, and who wouldn't wonder about his neighbor's wife? Nice touch about the fellow "pacing" himself so he would be up for things the next morning ... those of us over 50 have been there! kimosaabi9000@yahoo.com
So she's inside masturbating prone on the bed. He's outside the room looking in through the window. She 'whispers' and he hears her? Please!
Not enough characterisation, or scene setting. The only bit I like was the use of the word 'snit'!