All Comments on 'Dancing'

by Cheleste

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Scorpio44Scorpio44about 15 years ago
The metaphor was good...

the writing was good. Here comes the BUT: but, it just ended. It had a beginning (a little short IMHO), and a middle, then a premature end. Tell us about the reclining mambo of the next morning, their breakfast in bed, something.

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