I loved your story, as far as it has gone. I don't know how you feel about doing more with this story, but I really wish you would. You have laid the foundation for what could be a beautiful incestuous love story. Thanks for sharing a very real talent.
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Anonymous10/30/07
May Grandma Joins in the Rehab
Beautifully and tenderly drawn characters with the tension of incestual sex hovering over and enveloping the scenes with erotic lust.
The pregnant reference was however a turnoff.
Hope there is a sequel with momma watching and encouraging her two boys playing with each over.
Maybe the waitress' gray haired ripe bodied mum will stay with the boys during the rehab period. Ummm granma and the boys -- now that that would be a treat with the waitress joining in.
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COULD NOT BE BETTER
Whay a lovely way to recover for mom,would like to hear more about this family.
Different
I enjoyed this story however I started to question them not caring if she got pregnant .
Let's Have a Sequel
I loved your story, as far as it has gone. I don't know how you feel about doing more with this story, but I really wish you would. You have laid the foundation for what could be a beautiful incestuous love story. Thanks for sharing a very real talent.
May Grandma Joins in the Rehab
Beautifully and tenderly drawn characters with the tension of incestual sex hovering over and enveloping the scenes with erotic lust.
The pregnant reference was however a turnoff.
Hope there is a sequel with momma watching and encouraging her two boys playing with each over.
Maybe the waitress' gray haired ripe bodied mum will stay with the boys during the rehab period. Ummm granma and the boys -- now that that would be a treat with the waitress joining in.
lots missing
Such a long time laid up, what about periods?
Those objecting to pregnancies - duh! - its 'incest' therefore pregnancy is highly likely
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