Aaack! You're killing me here! Patrick's scary! But I think Aileen likes him that way.
This is such a hot story. I knew Patrick wouldn't just let her go.
I love this story, yea Patrick is scary but hot! can't wait to read the next chapter.
Posting your stories in installments is good, since I can't stay up all night reading the full story. But...I don't remember who Marcus is! That's the downside.
I'm really enjoying the story, and you keep surprising me. Thanks for posting your stories.
Of all your current story lines, which I'm also enjoying, this is my favorite. I love your style, the intense characters and the original story line. Please continue! And, of course, more and/or speed is greatly appreciated. (I think this is the only story line I've actually read twice through already!)
I'd love for you to write Marcus's story!
Marcus is also in the Marly Jackson stories. Far more in the published book (2nd coming out this year) then the first drafts on here. You can find out more about him there.
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