All Comments on 'Sister-in-law Comes to Play'

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"The curtains don't match the drapes" I don't believe that I've heard either of those expressions before but I liked both of them. Good story.

Thanks for the preamble to the main story. It felt like I was on a nice long walk instead of a sprint to the finish line.

Loved it. What's more I read it out loud to my own sister-in-law! We don't fuck but we did cum together enjoying your tale.

Hope you write some more soon. Would be good if you tried my stories too? You can find them on "girls_cum_first.

Thanks

Tom

I liked your story and the way you told it. It was all a great read from the fight to the fucking. It was a really lust filled story with smoldering passion between the two in-laws.<P>This is very good work for your first submission. Thank you for the entertainment and minds eye view.<P>PT

the fight scene came out of nowhere and made me laugh. completely random.

Very hot. You didn't say whether or not you bred her....

So was she on the Pill, or not? It looks like you and her will be coupling in the future as well, barebacked, too? Maybe the two of you can start a new life (or two, or three) is you keep meeting and fucking without aid of birth conrol? Which would mean more of this erotic story for you to write.

One of the greatest stories I have ever read in this site. Your attention to detail is excellent, as I could paint the scene in my mind as I read it.

Just a great story. What more's there to say... Love it.

Came looking for a sister-in-law story in response to a novel dream I had has night that ended prematurely. This one matched up perfectly, even had the sisters names right for me...

Hot story.

My wife's youngest sister often stays at our house. She lounges around in her sexy bra and panties many mornings and I can tell she enjoys the effect it has on me. Maybe one of these days I'll be able to relate a story similar to yours!

I almost said I loved you.

Brilliant story

only a dog would cheat on his kids and wife, soneone should tell the wife. I

would tell her.

I wish someone could make this story as a film...

Can't wait for your next work!

"I started licking, kissing and sucking Stephanie as she withered on my couch." She's some kind of flower?

Not bad, but hardly original.

So HOT !! We have to have a second chapter about how Steph and Ryan do next time !! This certainly had very good details and the emotions flowing between them. Thank you !

Reminds me of a time long ago when I nearly had the same experience with my sister-in-law. Unfortunately, I never made it as well as they both did.

Loved this , strong sex, and quite posable, well paced and thought out, hope that a new chapter will be along in the same vane but longer.

curious on if he will bang other members of his wife's female family members. cause u kno a 20 yr old cant keep her mouth shut. hopefully he can experience from his wife's side of the family. hope u write more

Oh Yes, a horny SIL was all for his taking and after doing her that many times with a big cock etc. she will be back for sure. Hopefully, Steph will call him soon and keep going ! They make a cute couple and maybe she'll have some ideas of her own after what he did ?? Thank you.

I am confused.

I like the story of Ryan and Steph and how he flirted with Natalie.

However, the bar fight perplexed me. It did not advance the story and made Ryan look like an immature guy. Plus, a fight like that with video surveillance means the police will be after Ryan and John and his friends. Women do not usually get attracted to guys who need bail money. and have court dates,

**Also, as a man, I know women generally do not like violence, so the bar fight can depress dyour story's rating.**

Thinking of it, the bar fright did not put Ryan in bed with Steph; in fact she might have gone t his house on the Friday night when he stayed at Jon's place! Thenit coild have been two days of extra-marital muff diving and more.

It is a little like a hockey game fight that just distracts from the game of hockey.

I will look to your other stories with the hope they are not violent.

Reminds me of the first time i had sex with my wifes sister it was all i dreamed it would be. She is small with little a cup tits and a really creamy pussy tiny labia and tastes so good. I have emptied my juice into her so many times even after she got married i still do and love sending her home full of my cum

To the confused commenter below, this isn't that hard to figure out. The protagonist is a good fighter, has a big cock, and fucks his wife's sister. It's an alpha male fantasy.

A very nice story detailing the husband cuckolding his wife. No justifications given, just wanted to fuck her while wife was away. Not complicated at all, just illicit sex. And good enough for 3 stars.

Bill S.

Kind of stupid really. No mention all the STDs running around. Just another spin to try to make somebody feel it's okay for them to run around like loose dogs I guess...

Ignorant fight scene thrown in for no apparent reason. Same old routine characters. Not much creativity here, just another loser trying to be free, someone who never should have married in the first place.

Have to agree with the comment on the bar fight below. "You can't fix stupid. But you can get it a court date..."