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Great start
Hot stroy and i hope you write some more of her adventures.
Great start
Hot story and i hope you write some more of her adventures.
Yep sick people make the world go round.
And you two can use the very expensive medicine used to treat AIDS, not cure mind you, just treat you. Gotta keep the docs and pharmacy companies in business dont we?
Sweet reading
The review below is self righteous jerk spouting moral points of view he wants to push. If you don't like the stories why read them or bother commenting at all. No one cares about your pathetic puritanical crusade.
Nice work
The people who leave comments need to remember that these works are fiction. As for your story I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.
Thanks
Hot story, please write more..
Pimping 4 Free - Watching At Great Cost
Writer - you and just plane need to trade wives to 2 other real men so you can both watch until you realize that any asshole can do that - all he needs is a ho and no self respect.
Cheers sick ones.
Loved it!
That was a great story; she trusts you, you love her and she turns you on, everybody had a great time. Keep up the fine work. As for those of you who seem to live for the chance to piss on someone else's WORK OF FICTION/EROTIC STORY to grandstand your fucked up sense of moral superiority, why the hell dont you just keep your fucking anonymous opinions to yourselves if you have nothing good to say. Better yet, why not actually WRITE a story yourselves?
Should that be "Gory Whole Sult"?
Awful writing. I've no idea what a "turcker" is. An alien life form perhaps? What is certain is that the author cared so little for the quality of the work that s/he didn't bother with a spellcheck. If the author doesn't care, why should I?
Wonderful!
Great story!
I know what a turn-on it can be watching your wife suck cocks, especially through a gloryhole.
Take her there more often and have her suck more cocks.
Pls write more!
You two rock ...
;-)
Pre-occupied ??
Both the writer and some reviewers have spelling mistakes.
"Turckers" and "stroys" are new ones to me. Perhaps as one earlier reviewer suggested they could indeed be alien life forms... ( possibly engaging in a "close encounter" of their own) However I myself think it more likely that the mispelling scribes are probably just typing left-handed.
She should share
The next time she should get him ready and let you finish him. Tag team GH cocksucking.... sounds like a great sport!!
Now that's what
I call a fun marrige. Elia you're my kinf of scum. And don't let these moral police stop you from writing these kind of stories. I love it and want to take my wife to a gloryhole too!!!!!
Great Story
Fantastic stuff. I wish my wife would be a gloryhole slut too. Looking forward to more good stories.
Glory Hole glory
Your story was truly great. I only wish I was the lucky guy your wife was getting fucked in the mouth by. Have her keep them cumming. I know the story had that effect on me!
I am a writer on this site as well and it gave me more inspiration for a future story or two of mine. Thanks.
oh yeah
Thanks you have given me an idea as to how to get my wife to suck off a guy while I watch.
lucky man
both guys are so lucky, wish I could talk her into a abs, none here.
Stiffy every time I read this story.
Wish you would write again. Miss your touch with a story line.
Cliches...
The mini dress and no underwear. Old and tired. Wish people would stop using them.
Cliches... WTF?
Cliches...
"The mini dress and no underwear. Old and tired. Wish people would stop using them."
What the fuck would you prefer? Granny panties and a burka?
What could be hotter than a mini dress and no panties?
Loved the story
Maybe cliches do get old and tired..........but I will say being naked under a skirt that is barely longer than your dangling, wet, swollen labia is an amazing turn on. Glory holes are hot and wonderful and finding a stunning bride with a husband that enjoys both is very unusual, so many men dream of this, very few ever experience it, especially with a woman that enjoys it too.
I know, I serve my Master in many ways/all ways and all desires. Enjoy that you have each other and enjoy being alive and sexual and pleasing each other.
The story was lovely, maybe not the most original, but it is alive and exciting and so naughty that I enjoyed it very much, no matter how experienced I am. Hugs to you both........Write more, I love hearing glory hole stories and if you do find that 10" cock again, after he fills your mouth, run out the door and grab him, and if nothing else send him my way..................LOL
Have fun, loved your naughty story, hope you continue to enjoy life and sex together in many ways.
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