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by Anonymous

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by champagne198209/28/07

Love the glitter

I do too. "hesitation marks when the words
came like a leaky faucet"

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by twelveoone09/29/07

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I feel the last two lines could be better, maudlin, plays badly against the drip, drip, drip.

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by KOLKORE09/29/07

My Journal, my beloved.

I loved your description of your love to writing, not just the ideas and the feelings but the process itself - has sensual qualities which you have depicted so well. I agree with previous commenters who felt that the last stanza felt misplaced. It felft more like an abstraction, almost a cliche I am afraid, compared with the wonderful concrete qualities of your previous engagements with your journal. Still, a very emotional and touching poem.

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by LeBroz09/30/07

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Bit of creativity, writing a poem about your poetry journal. Tend to go with 1201's thought about the ending; not bad, but seems almost predictable.

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